Ellette Giselle

@jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @grcr @rae @raxforge is that everyone?

Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara)

Before answering, Marcel glanced at Ellis, who still watched the road. The sword-wielding young man gave a nod. The soldiers had passed them.

“We came from outside the city,” Marcel called. “The soldiers think we’re…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Thanks! 😁😁

@ellette-giselle @grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper @hybridlore @loopylin @jonas

Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Marcellus, Flare, Leon, and Julian, about to meet up with Ellis, Marcel, Sara, and Fel, I think. Elderstrand edge.

Yay. A storm. Brutus felt an unintentional rise in his powers, formulating itself as a barrier of wind around him. Brutus…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @raxforge @rae @whalekeeper @hybridlore @jonas @loopylin

An hour later, and I confused myself. Shout-out to my superpower called Overthinking. 😑

Marcellus — Everstrand | with Ben Gunn, Flare, Brutus, Leon, and Julian—near Marcel, Sara, Felicity, and Ellis 

Marcellus pulled a folded, yellow bucket hat from the front pock…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Alright, sure. Just a moment… 😁

@whalekeeper

lol 😂😄

@ellette-giselle

Tbh, I’m pretty much always on here. Even when I’m not logged in. I watch everything in incognito mode.

@hybridlore @jonas @ellette-giselle

I set up our group so we are in an alley, within eyesight of the bigger group. 👍

@hybridlore

We were talking about joining our group with @rae @raxforge @grcr and @ellette-giselle‘s group (Baron, Ben, Flare, Marcellus, Julian, and Leon.) That’s kind of a lot, but I don’t expect this section of the RP to be all that much longer anyway.

@rae @raxforge @ellette-giselle

Our characters are right next to yours, see below.

@jonas @hybridlore @loopylin

Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara)

The four travellers tried to look inconspicuous in the dark. Their soaked clothes mostly blended in with the background. Marcel noticed Felicity’s bright hair, and motioned for her to shove…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin @hybridlore

Ellis —— Elderstrand (w/ Marcel, Felicity, Sara)

Ellis nodded. “Let’s go. Quick!”

The group slipped into the alley and waited in silence as the soldiers neared the street.

“Spread out!” someone shouted. “They must be here somewhere.”

Ellis gripped his sword tight, prepared to silence the first person who…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Look, if anyone picks up the series at book two, they deserve to be confused. *shrug*

I have a friend with the same mindset. Alcatraz Smeadry will probably approve heartily!

WHAT? That doesn’t even fit with the period!!!

Like I said, my mind was in a weird place. Specifically in the place of a reader snacking on some y…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

That works! Just swap wife and son for parents.

@stephie

The one thing I’m going to criticize is what Charles says when his son is saved: 

Okay, I will see what I can do about that. Though I may put this one off for a bit. Thank you for pointing this out. I’m not the most emotional person, so sometimes I struggle with writing em…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Lol, I was wondering when you would start wanting the backstory.

This is a good opportunity to see how someone who has not read Book I can understand this book. Like it or not, some people will start to read your series with Book II, III, or IV. Remember to provide the context for these readers so that they will be able to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle Believe me, these stories are marketed for 8-year-olds:

• Wings of Fire (dragon series I read once with a good deal of violence. One character’s death is so graphic the writer didn’t even describe it, although that was in a side story that I didn’t read though cause it didn’t grab me.)
• Warrior cats series (LOTS of war and…

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@ellette-giselle

I’m fine with it, but Baron is gonna lose his mind if you do that. lol

Oh you have no idea. Not only is it storming which increases his power, he’s also gonna have to go into fight mode.

@jonas

I’m good with it

@whalekeeper @loopylin @hybridlore

Ellis —— Elderstrand (w/ Marcel, Felicity, and Sara)

“I don’t like this place,” Ellis muttered. “Where do we go now?”

Just then, there was a sound of shouting. Ellis turned and saw soldiers scurrying along the wall above. They were trapped.

There was the sound of a patrol coming down a street to the…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @rae @raxforge @grcr

So, your characters are inside the city? Within the wall? Well, I’m thinking of having the city go on lockdown, which may provide some lovely drama. That would also be a good opportunity to send in the NPCs if you’re ready.

@ellette-giselle

Forgot to tag you in my RP above

Tsk, tsk, tsk. Terrible (joking)

@ellette-giselle @rae @grcr

Ben Gunn, Flare – Baron (Brutus), Marcellus, Leon, and Julian, Everstrand edge

“How about, no.” Ben did not want to have to fight with more guards, “We should go out of the city, and stay out there for the night.”

Flare nodded with approval.

@ellette-giselle @grcr @rae

Leon and Julian—with Baron, Ben Gunn, Flare, and Marcellus, Everstrand edge

Leon stared at the scar, and he felt a tightness in his throat. He knew the kind of men responsible for something like this. In fact, that was why he was here. He glanced over at his friend. Julian’s face had paled, and he was clenching and u…[Read more]