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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Okay, then yes, that’s makes sense.
LOL. Okay, I’m sorry for interrupting your story. I’ll just sit here quietly and wait for the next segment. 😂
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
What do you mean by splitting the sections into two parts?
I think it’s fine as long as you don’t end the last scene abruptly and put like a marker, like “six years later…”I don’t know, just with Joseph feeling called to go off alone to a different city where basically no one is a Christian… I understand it is a missionary st…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yeah.. 😅 Okay! I will. 😁
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
It looks like nine… counting their Miracle of Christmas one. Daniel, David, Esther, Samson, Moses, Ruth, Jonah, Jesus… (oh, I like the Jesus soundtrack too.)
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle
Ah, I’ve found the ones on YouTube… we don’t have Pandora or Spotify though so… ☹️😕
Alright!! I’ll read them when I have the time. 💛
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
WOAH. Time jump. But I love the new side plot. Although, Joseph is basically becoming Aaron now, like Linus has mentioned. I wonder how you could change his circumstances to make it feel completely different from Aaron. But anyway, great job! 👏 I’ll listen to the song later and let you know what I think.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
All of them? Oh my, I did not know this!! I’ll have listen to them—I’ve only heard a few.
They are lol!
Sure! 😄
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yess!! Oh, awesome!! Yes! Daniel too!! We really want to see Noah, so we’re hoping they’ll do it in Branson, lol. We haven’t seen David yet, but we’re thinking about it. Oh yes, I agree about the music! So far, Esther has been my fav, but I really love the Samson soundtrack too. 😁
Well… I haven’t really read much at all, to…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Yes!! My family even saw the whole play at Sight & Sound!!
I sure have, lol. Not a lot, though.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Sorry to suddenly intrude, but……….
AH AH AH!! Oh my goodness, oh my goodness! I love that song so much!!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
By the way, you keep on interrogating me about Leon. So I want to interrogate you on Eric. What do you think about him now? Where do you think things are going to go for him?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
I guess it would not be beyond Tyn to try to break off from the other soldiers and see if she can contribute more. I’ll see what I can do with that. Thanks!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Just watching Avatar the Last Airbender for the first time with my sibling in. 12 Chapters into Book 1 right now. Prince Zuko and his uncle have been my favourite characters so far.
Lol. It’s very affective. Trust me…………..
Sounds like you are speaking form experience here.
well I want Joseph to have SOME faith. Plus, its easy…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Here is the unfinished chapter. (Anyone else who want to read it and/or help me out can as well)
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hybridlore posted a new activity comment 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle
That’s good with me! I might not be able to give you my main one since my mom prefers me to use a different one for people I don’t know irl. Give me a sec and I’ll figure it out. -
Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
Give me five minutes please, and I will try to post what I have written so far so that you will have the context you need. Warning, there may be more inconcitecies/grammer mistakes in here than usual. And this is going to be a long chapter. (I might split it into two for my third draft.)
(Oh, you know what would really smart? Is…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
If you could share a bit more detail I might have an easier time coming up with ideas.
Yup, it’s Eric. (How did you know?)
Eric was hiding by the blockade, where he was waiting for any of the rescued Faithful to show up. However, he made the mistake of hiding to close and was spotted when some soldiers dismounted to see if they…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 7 months ago
There was a little box holding the ring that had been his mother’s. Her favorite shawl was folded beside his father’s hunting knife. His very own Bible lay with the treasures, and beside it were several shiny stone from the creek that flowed through his father’s farm. Joseph leaned forward and set the papers gently back into the b…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle I’ll tag you and respond to that post somewhere else!
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