Ellette Giselle

@esther-c @quicksilverwyvern @elishavet-pidyon @koshka

Thanks, everyone!

My computer doesn’t like this forum for some reason, so it’s hard for me to respond to everyone individually. (My side, not your side. It glitches and stuff on my side :P)

Anyways, your advice has helped a lot!

I still can’t decide if I am a pantser or plotter.

Plotting…[Read more]

@rae

I’ll probably share the full thing at some point, but the basic blurb is in a world where heroes walk the streets, the one man who doesn’t want to become a hero has the most powerful gift in the world.

Well now I want to know what his gift is. We love a story about an average joe who is involuntarily chosen to be a cosmic keystone or som…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’ll probably share the full thing at some point, but the basic blurb is in a world where heroes walk the streets, the one man who doesn’t want to become a hero has the most powerful gift in the world.

Secret-ish? Whaley, since when have any of your writing projects NOT been secret-ish?

I’m kinda the last person I would ask for…[Read more]

@whalekeeper I c a n t b r e a t h

@craftyspacepirates

I really love this concept for Taylor’s powers. It reminds me of people in real life who dissociate or have maladaptive daydreaming which helps them with stress, but has the danger of separating them too far from themselves and reality. The description at the beginning was especially my favorite.

As far as grammar goes, I…[Read more]

New angles, I should say

@loopylin

I’m glad that brought you joy. I aspire to open writers’ eyes to new perspectives on their characters.

Moving on.

never

@whalekeeper I’m dead. My abs hurt so bad from cackling and wheezing. Thank you for that wonderful insight.

Moving on.

@beth-torres

I tried adding that one guy, but he was too crazy and brain-hurt…ly…

My goodness, I think he got buried under the other rps. I’m so sorry. Ramen, right? We should figure out how to start an interaction with him. I have too many characters at the moment… but surely we can figure something out.

More likely than not, I sha…

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What did I just say

@keilah-h

On the contrary, I think the high-pressure social environment – combined with emotional stressors from home and learned stiff posture – would probably cause the opposite. Perhaps glute clenching.

On the topic of “farted in the halls,” to be fair this is an all boys school, right?

when my brother was in an all boys group, he would repeatedly come back with wild stories, and everyone in the halls farting or at least making fart noises at each other is exactly the sorta thing they would’ve done lolllll

@koshka

You took me out. I got a notif for this in the middle of class during a break and I could not stop grinning for a while. Imagine that was canon and important enough for Ari to notice.

@beth-torres

*composes self* I am a mature woman.

Yes, yes, we’re all mature women here.

@loopylin

Oh my word. Yes that’s a typo. Why do the ‘d’ and ‘f’ keys have to be next to each other?? XI

@beth-torres

Glad it gave you joy. I shall go fix it, thank you. You may resume maturity.

@koshka

Students farted along the halls.

I’m assuming you meant to type “darted”, but this is hilarious to me. It sounds like something my dad (a teacher) would say

@whalekeeper @koshka

Ok here’s what they’re walking into

Lois

Lois felt that he had checked every room in the castle by now, looking for that aggravating automaton. He had not, of course. The academy was very large, and there were plenty of private or restricted areas. But still, he was tired. He cradled a mug of black coffee he had gotten from…[Read more]

@loopylin @whalekeeper

I would like to point out to Ellis that Ari has not said he was going to class.

Ari

After another moment of hesitation, he finally managed to stepntowards the door. Perhaps walking with Moth would be enough. At the least, he knew where the chemistry classes were held. They wouldn’t be lost to the tangle of ordered…[Read more]

@loopylin

*Drowns in laughter*

I love them. Poor Lucien. I like that kid. And that is exactly what Ari sees.

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @koshka Wow, that is so awesome, guys!!