@ellette-giselle
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 21 hours ago
By the way, you keep on interrogating me about Leon. So I want to interrogate you on Eric. What do you think about him now? Where do you think things are going to go for him?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 21 hours ago
I guess it would not be beyond Tyn to try to break off from the other soldiers and see if she can contribute more. I’ll see what I can do with that. Thanks!
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 21 hours ago
Just watching Avatar the Last Airbender for the first time with my sibling in. 12 Chapters into Book 1 right now. Prince Zuko and his uncle have been my favourite characters so far.
Lol. It’s very affective. Trust me…………..
Sounds like you are speaking form experience here.
well I want Joseph to have SOME faith. Plus, its easy…
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 21 hours ago
Here is the unfinished chapter. (Anyone else who want to read it and/or help me out can as well)
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 22 hours ago
Give me five minutes please, and I will try to post what I have written so far so that you will have the context you need. Warning, there may be more inconcitecies/grammer mistakes in here than usual. And this is going to be a long chapter. (I might split it into two for my third draft.)
(Oh, you know what would really smart? Is…
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-GRCR- posted an update 6 days, 1 hour ago
Dirty water splashed on my heavy boots as I made my way through Bröijin—the largest of Englroy’s abandoned prisons. Something dripped from the roof—likely old water that had been trapped in the room above. A few doors creaked as they swung on their rusting hinges. There was a draft blowing from somewhere, but I could no longer feel it as I turned…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 2 hours ago
Yup. That fits. I think I deserved that.
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 2 hours ago
If you could share a bit more detail I might have an easier time coming up with ideas.
Yup, it’s Eric. (How did you know?)
Eric was hiding by the blockade, where he was waiting for any of the rescued Faithful to show up. However, he made the mistake of hiding to close and was spotted when some soldiers dismounted to see if they…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 2 hours ago
Did you draw all of these?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 2 hours ago
Its, its… BEAUTIFUL!!! 😭😭😭😭 I am crying TEARS of JOY!
Thank you.
Is the magic potato going to answer my poorly poetic question, or am I going to just have to trust it has good intentions?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 2 hours ago
There was a little box holding the ring that had been his mother’s. Her favorite shawl was folded beside his father’s hunting knife. His very own Bible lay with the treasures, and beside it were several shiny stone from the creek that flowed through his father’s farm. Joseph leaned forward and set the papers gently back into the b…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 2 hours ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 2 hours ago
Why does it have to be such a specific way?
Magic potato, havoc potato, what potato am I?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 2 hours ago
@ellette-giselle I’ll tag you and respond to that post somewhere else!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 2 hours ago
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 2 hours ago
Forgot your tag on the previous post
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 2 hours ago
“I don’t know. He finally got to a point where he stopped threatening to kill us every other minute. But from then on, he just listened silently. When he left, he made no indication that he was ever coming back. all I know is something changed his mind in respect to killing us. Beyond that…” Noah shrugged again.
It occurs to me that Sabina…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 2 hours ago
@linus-smallprint LOL.
Really?! I didn’t know you wrote dystopian! What’s it about?
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 2 hours ago
You grandness has inspired me to write some possible bad poetry.
*Ahem*
Magic Potato in the chat,
I’m sitting at your welcome mat.
If I may if I might:
(for I think I have a right)
I admit, I can be shy,
When I know not the reason why,
Some benefits, I’d like to see.
A potato, why should I be?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 6 days, 2 hours ago
Okay! Which novel are you working on?
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