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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle yep, pretty real to me lol
I might try it! If I can find a place to get the song.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle The way you talked about Sniper sounds like he’s in the room looking over my shoulder at what I’m typing lolllllll
Which would actually be terrifying for a few reasons. But hey, it’s not like I haven’t also insinuated that my characters actually exist and know what I think of them lol
Anyway, that song is super cool, fits Ro…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
😈😈😈
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Picture is pretty much finished. Will post tomorrow…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Huh, weird. I didn’t do that intentionally, but it might be because you don’t have an account anymore. 🤷
Thank you so much!!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@rae That sounds cool!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle I don’t know. Either way could work.
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Koshka replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Lovely! It looks like a book my brother would pick up at Mardel.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh, never mind, you found the typo.
Other than that, the cover looks beautiful.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Also, I have a few suggestions for the back blurb.
- You accidentally wrote “These children are forbidden to form any emotional that might hinder their unwavering loyalty.” Should it be “emotional bond” instead?
- “Jonathan, the second-born” should maybe be something like “Jonathan, a second-born.” But that one can stay in if you really want…
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle That looks really good!!
I’m assuming the number changes for each sector.
It reminds me a little bit of the insignias my brother designs for his Icebreaker Empire universe. (He hopes to someday make a video game with a tie-in book series.)
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
It looks awesome! Is that for the series covers, or an illustration, or what?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
So exciting!! 😅
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Good to have you back!
I’ll try to get to those questions later today. 😉 Sorry I haven’t yet.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mission Impossible– Two books out by 12/14/2025 in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle yay!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle I know right? It’s hilarious!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@ellette-giselle I love those lolllll
why are those so much like the things my characters would say (the first one is such a Blue and Rinzler kind of conversation to have lolllll)
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Sounds like a lot of fun! I hope it works out! 🤗
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, I meant to update you, but obviously I didn’t. Sorry.
@keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium @hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @ellette
I did decide on something that turned out to be completely different than my other plans. My family and I went to a zoo a couple weeks ago, on the way, we passed through an area that had tons of…[Read more]
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Enid replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
Lovely art as usual. I especially like the cat!!
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