Ellette Giselle

@loopylin @i-dont-know-who-else-to-tag-cuz-im-tired

Check out this sick box camera I found. Made in the 20s. I can see upside down images through the lens and there’s a flash when I flip the shutter. I want to find some film and try it out, although the inside is warped.

@ellette-giselle

Is this POV yours? Real life local mysteries are unironically the best thing ever, unless they involve people getting hurt. I had a missing criminal hanging around my mailbox one time. Those things are the spice of life.

You should research what chemicals might change colors like that.

BRUH LOL IT DID

The image worked! Nice.

@ellette-giselle

Well… we aren’t at the end of the book yet. 🫣

@ellette-giselle

Yay! KP is back!

Good chapters. They made it out of there pretty easily. I thought that was going to be tough…

@ellette-giselle I really gotta get caught up, the past few days I haven’t been able to read them (been using my allotment of screen time for other things)

@ellette-giselle

You’re welcome!

(Odd how it’s so clear in your mind and then someone tells you what they though you said and it’s not at all what you meant. I find this in writing and in speaking.)

Yup. Another reason for proofreading.

If you have another book later on that doesn’t have Christian rebellion as a major component, I will be hap…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Book feedback for you!

Sector 5 Book Feedback

@whalekeper

That’s a lot, haha. I bet many of them are siblings to the protagonists.

Well actually yeah, pretty much! 😅😆 Siblings or (school) friends lolol.

@hybridlore

You’re welcome!

For Alec’s arc, I was expecting him to do something in the climax that would impact either Sara or Cole. Prehapes both of them. Something like helping Sara, telling Witlock that he can’t work there anymore, helping Cole ‘protect’ Sara, or even standing up to Cole and trying to stop him.

I think chapter 55 wouldn’t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wow! That was so tense! I can’t wait for Cassion to tell them!

@linus-smallprint

Thank you so much!

I know some of us were discussing this during the book, but I like the idea of showing Sara and Cole’s closer relationship in the beginning of the book. I’m going to look and see if I can insert this into the early chapters.

I see what you mean about Alec being a pretty stagnant character during the book.…[Read more]

@theshadow

Thank you for the concern, it’s so kind of you! Your right on the money, I have noticed I’ve become a bit obsessive/overly scrupulous about things recently, so as you mentioned I will look into OCD.

No problem! 🙃 I hope you find some helpful material. Just let me know if you want me to link some stuff that’s helped me before! Pra…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

You’re just going to leave us on that?? 🥺

@ellette-giselle

Aww. Those were good.

@hybridlore

I have added my feedback to your file!