@ellette-giselle
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
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Sara — Elderstrand, w/ Group 1
Sara flinched as one of the machines threw the tall girl with white-blond hair against a building. Her head lolled to the side for a moment and then snapped up as the robot started walking toward her.
Sara steeled herself and rushed out from the alley. F…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle
That looks great! And that R is very impressive I love the swirls -
Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@freed_and_redeemed Aww Ryo! So cute <3
I love seeing your character drawings
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@jonas I was imagining the Ironwalkers as just enchanted suits of armor before. The fact that there’s something inside but they still don’t make any noise makes them a lot scarier.
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Felicity- Group 1, Edge of Elderstrand
Felicity took the staff gratefully. Her knuckles were raw and…[Read more]
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-GRCR- posted an update 2 weeks, 1 day ago
when you’re researching a skill for a character, and then your like “actually I kinda wanna do this too”
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
The Bible does repeatedly say how much God hates lies, and although there are certain situations where His people lie (and are possibly blessed for it?), nowhere in the Bible does it say “Lying is okay, if you’re doing it to save people.”
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Wow. I just tagged myself instead of @whalekeeper because of copy-paste 😂 Sorry.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
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Sorry y’all, I might not be very active on the RP for the next week because I have a debate coming up, so feel free to toss Sara around wherever she needs to be.
Sara — Elderstrand, w/ Group 1
Silver music appeared in Sara’s vision as one of the strangers began playing on some…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle This is why I said I wasn’t certain whether or not I agreed with you because of those situations. I feel like lying goes against what God wants us to do as Christians, but I’m not sure what I would do in those scenarios.
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I think I’ll add another character after the fight is over, if that’s alright. Or guess technically two characters. One and a half? I should go back and check how many character slots we’re allowed.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I’m not exactly sure if I agree with you about God ever wanting Christians to lie, but I get that you’re voicing your own beliefs and I understand why you don’t want to change it. However, just be aware that it might be a slightly controversial topic.
Anyway, I love the plot twist. Great job with the details leading up to it…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@whalekeeper Yay! Freakiness is the intention :]
And yes, lots of world building. And re-world building. I still have zero plot tho
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
Oh whoops we’ve been forgetting to tag @hybridlore
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Loopy replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@ellette-giselle My character doesn’t even have military training. She’s just… very determined.
@grcr @raxforge @whalekeeper @jonas @raeFelicity— Group 1, Edge of Elderstrand
“Clickmen.” Felicity shuddered at the sound of metal footsteps. It was clear as they got closer that they were not the machines Felicity was used to, but she didn’t care…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
So, even though this doesn’t sound pleasant, what I ended up doing was reading the chapter through and then rewriting it completely, using the old chapter as a reference point for events that needed to happen and dialogue I wanted to keep.
That is what I’m doing as well, but either my new ideas are much better than my old or my q…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I would be interested in your reasons behind why you don’t agree with her/my reasoning. Though keep in mind I won’t be changing this scene, so if you find it a waste of time then don’t bother explaining.
To put it simply, it is impossible for God to lie (Hebrews 6:18). Now of course, things are different for God, but Jesus, in Hi…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
This is one of the best ones yet!!
Huh. You often supprise me with the scenes that you think are the best.
I’m curious, did you write this from scratch, or was it in the draft?
In my first draft, I was unsure if I wanted to send Alan to save The Faithful after he joined them. Event happened differently there. Alan found out ab…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
It does seem a tiny bit sudden, but I don’t know cause I’ve never actually seen a person get saved and them follow their life immediately afterward.
Alan does feel a little bit rushed to get back to planning since other people are in danger. He also felt the need to apologize to Rour, and had to go through Stripe to get to him.…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 1 day ago
I was a little distratded during this chapter because I do disagree with you on weather or not it is okay for Christians to lie to protect others. However, I don’t really have a response to the arguments that Sabina gives and I belive this to be a tercarary issue, so unless you want to discus this, I’m willing to leave it…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 1 day ago
@jonas YES!
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Baron (Brutus)—Group 1, Elderstrand edge
Brutus sighed, before coughing once more. After which, he harnessed the wind once again, throwing the strong wind at the foremost figure, trying to knock it over. But nothing appeared to happen to the things. Brutus gave a cry,…[Read more]
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