Ellette Giselle

@linus-smallprint

Hmm. well, first of all the fact that the church has stopped being attacked. Then a reference Sabina made in her letter about the soldiers being super tense. Then Joseph notices the same thing.

Hmm. I wounder how true this will turn out to be.

Haha,

Poor Joseph. I completely understand his reaction to this.

I know poor…[Read more]

@rae

Ah! That makes sense!!

lol.

@rae

I like it, but I’m confused about her age. She acts about five. Maybe eight if you want to stretch it. But I thought you said she was a teen. If she is, (why does she have such childish dialogue) and how is she hugging Baron around the legs? is he a giant?

Other then that, I really liked it! It’s a very sweet scene.

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NEXT SECTION!

“Joseph, what if I displease you?”

Joseph and Amelia were sitting on the steps in what had become their normal place for talking. They were watching as David and Stephen played ball with the younger boys. Joseph had just finished playin…

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@loopylin

That is such an un-cool reason to hit someone.

lololololol.

I just about died when I read that.

@rae

I know what I want!!!! I want more Baron.

Or Nahim.

@linus-smallprint

Again, the sort of topic that makes me uncomfortable. I think you handle it fine, and don’t say anything more than needed. I just wonder if it is necessary.

That makes you uncomfortable? Just saying a guy wants to give the girl he loves a hug?

I found this greatly funny. Sorry. I probably shouldn’t.

So I think I’m going to k…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

And I’m gonna be the person Keilah referred to……..

The spells. Why do we need to know the images? I mean, spell casting is directly linked to demonic powers. Casting spells is a real thing, (the Bible talks about it) and it’s always linked to demons. It’s not something to be taken lightly or played with. I don’t think…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

oooo, I love dangerous moods.

@elishavet-pidyon

I want to here more of your story. *shrug* desperate times call for desperate measures.

@hybridlore

thanks!

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NEXT SECTION!

The weeks passed, and Joseph lived through them in a blur of joy and excitement. He and Amelia had many wonderful conversations with her parents, and even some between just the two of them. They worked together when they could and enjoyed obs…

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@koshka

Oh just wait, this is going to be spinning circles in Rory’s head now.

Rory

Rory let out a breath of relief and followed Leo toward the back door. Leo opened it and checked both ways before slipping outside, Silvia beside him. Rory paused and turned one lingering look back on the church. Then, he turned and hurried after Leo and the…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Yeah, but now you get to throw thirty, and I get more Riker/Leon scenes!!! (Or Hans and Felix scenes,) and you get more written so I can read the book sooner!!! It’s a win win!

Oh phew. I was going to be devastated if something happened to Eli. I love that kid so much.

*slaps hands over my mouth* oh no, I may have just…[Read more]

@hybridlore

It’s just really any cut. Hands, knees, elbows, shins. I don’t know why we all do it. I think it’s because it makes the stinging stop. *shrug*

@koshka

I know. I’m really liking where this is going tho.

Rory

Rory sniffed, looking at the ground. He could feel Quincy’s arms around him, and he hugged the boy tighter to his chest, nearly suffocating him. He laid a hand over Quincy’s head as if to shield him from something unseen.”I… I’m sorry Leo. I didn’t mean to lose it like that,”…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yeah, you could scar his face, or you could have some sort of wicked lightning scar that goes up his back and twists around one or both of his shoulders. Maybe the pain from those scars flares up now and then. *shrug* Plus, that could be a pretty terrible scene when Alan is getting the scars. There’s a tone of potential in it.

@linus-smallprint

What!?

what kind of childhood did you have never licking cuts? It’s a vital part of being a kid. lol.

Seriously, you could have caught any one of the kids at our church licking cuts after a ball game in the gravel parking-lot.

(cats do it too, btw)

@linus-smallprint

Oh why! Must it be a hand or foot? And why talons! Can’t you just restrict the movement! This is horrible. If he and Martha do get married, how is he supposed to hug her without slicing her back?!?!?

Think Linus!!!!

And partly crippling him really does not work, because think of the binds he’ll be in when trying to run or…[Read more]

@koshka

Rory

“Special?” Rory looked back at Leo, an expression of bitter surprise on his face. “Who says we’re special?” He shook his head, his throat tightening. “Only those who can get there way to the top of the government chain are ‘special’ and even then they can become unspecial pretty quick.” His voice was strained. “There’s nothing…[Read more]