Ellette Giselle

@hybridlore

Where are the links?

@keilah-h

Lolol. You’re welcome.

@hybridlore

Oh yay!! I was so sad when I went to comment and realized I couldn’t.

@hybridlore     @keilah-h

Lolololol.

Okay, well Joseph and Amelia ended up having nine kids. Mercy was the oldest of their children, with Beric being the oldest through adoption. (of that makes sense)

Beric and Quin designed a network of guys who went throughout Ardenta helping farmers recover land and people rebuild after the war. These g…[Read more]

@hybridlore

No. I can’t. Not without an account. 😥

Could you try using Microsoft? I have an account with them, and it’s not attached to google. It’s honestly safer, which is why I went with them. And You can set it up for free.

@hybridlore

*Crying because I can’t comment or see y’all’s comments*

Nooo, this is so sad.

😭

Oh well. I guess it can’t be helped.

@keilah-h

Well that’s good.

@hybridlore

Yeah, but he doesn’t know about them.

I do though.

if you be nice and say please…..

@hybridlore

yeah, if you let yourself you can see it coming from page 1 of their book. It was always there and always inevitable.

as for Rowan, I believe in Holy election, and because of that, this works. That’s more of a Calvinist view though. Basically, Rowan would have never believed no matter how much time he had, unless God called him. A…[Read more]

@keilah-h

yay!! I’m so glad.

@keilah-h

Wow really?! I’m glad you liked it!!

I like the time skip too. Oh. Odd. The original one has reference to WWI-II. It must have gotten lost when I was editing. Well, I kept adding greats, and it was getting stupid, so I cut it off at 3. About late 1300s to early 1400s is when I’d place the stories.

@linus-smallprint

Hmm, that could work. I’ll try that.

Oh wait, what if he’s describing the painting and he was like, “it was from one of the kingdoms that has knights, obviously not here,” or something like that.

Or does that not work.

I don’t know if that similarity between Leon and the prince was intentional or not, but try to pay a…

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@hybridlore

So my dad just finished your report for Alec last night. Would you like me to email it, or copy and past it here?

Also, I just shut down my google account, and when I did, I realized I can no longer access you book! Is there a way I can do that without google?

@freed_and_redeemed      @hybridlore     @koshka     @keilah-h       @elishavet-pidyon       @linus-smallprint

Okay all. Ready, set, here we go!

NEXT SECTION!

    Leon and Julian did not go back to sleep that night. They spent the remainder of those dark hours in prayer for their friends, the other believers, and even their enemies. They…

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@the_lost-journal

Lololol. Thanks. 😂

I might have to take a look.

@keilah-h

Thanks. I might!

@hybridlore

I know!!!!!! I’m a terrible author!!! 😱😭

Wait a sec…… isn’t it my goal to make the reader miserable? 😈🤣

I promise to send the next section today. Right now. I’m running final edits this very moment.

@linus-smallprint

Also, this is ‘As you know’ dialogue. Leon is telling Julian something he already knows in order to inform the reader.

is that actually bad though? I haven’t done it often, and I don’t see much of another way to get that info across. Plus, I’ve used “as you know” sentences before in conversation just to help listeners mak…[Read more]

@hybridlore

I was trying, but I think I’m out of time today. I almost had it done too. 😥

@keilah-h

dang that’s dark

yeah, well that’s reality for ya.

It seems like they suddenly have a lot more control over the Empire than they appear to.

Uh yeah. They’ve got a pretty strong hold now. Not only are they controlling the Empire’s ruler by fear of the gods, but they’ve got him personally motivated to avenge his cousin and set his kingd…[Read more]

@keilah-h

perhaps…

more like a knitted hat.

if you look closely at what the prince said, it leads to the suggestion that he was killed by the priests because he got upset at them for killing his son.

what do you think of Leon’s backstory?