Ellette Giselle

@linus-smallprint

Not your fault at all. I just lost my own personal race.

Yes, I can send the whole thing in just one sec. I’m going to lock it down tho, just because KP is somewhere anyone can get onto, so you won’t be able to do anything but read. Not even copy and paste. Hope you don’t mind.

So Aaron held on to the end, and he…

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@whalekeeper

Uh… no.

My brother would most certainly not be smiling. He’d be saying, “What the heck are you doing?”

If she was going to go with him, at all, she should go as a nurse or something and work behind battle lines.

Out of curiosity, do you have a brother?

@whalekeeper

I understand your point about extremes, but I still believe there are better ways for Bonnie to show love and support.

@linus-smallprint

Oh my goodness crazy.

She’s gonna need a translator if you keep that up.

Plus, it’s just a weird mix of old and modern English. (lol)

Let the expert take a hand.

The time hath come for thou to submit thy character description. Writeth one whenst thou art ready and tageth the artists

@linus-smallprint

Oh my goodness crazy.

She’s gonna need a translater if you keep that up.

Plus, it’s just a wierd mix of old and modern english. (lol)

Let the expert take a hand.

The time hath come for thou to submit thy character description. Writeth one whenst thou art ready and tageth the artists

@whalekeeper

No, Bonnie is being a little stupid at that point. She should completely and whole heartedly encourage and support her brother, (as long as he’s doing what’s right.) But that doesn’t mean she should take his weapon and go charging into war for him, or even take a weapon and go charging into war with him. She has many other things she…[Read more]

@keilah-h @linus-smallprint

I’m sorry it’s so long. I hope no one is reading this on their phone, because then it would seem REALLY long. There just wasn’t a good place to split this up.

So, picking up where we left off at the end of Aaron’s letter.

My Dear Joseph,

I don’t know how to begin this; It is so hard to say farewell. Dear little o…

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@whalekeeper

haha. Thanks.

@mineralizedwritings

Thank you! I can’t stand the other hand tho.

@linus-smallprint

No, wait, your not supposed to be one yet! Grrrr. (Explanation: I told myself I would get the next scenes fully edited and cleaned up before you or Keilah got on and commented on my WIP. I failed. lol)

Hee hee. I know that feeling.

Oh dear.

I hope it has nothing to do with your currant WIP.

Interesting thoughts on…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I may have had more lenience toward stepping out of the norm several years back. However, with the way the world is going right now, not just trying to blur lines but erase them, I think we, as followers of Christ, should be careful we have no part in that. What does it hurt you to take a few steps in the opposite direction of the…[Read more]

I hate her hand, but otherwise this is good.

@koshka @whalekeeper @loopylin

I believe there are circumstances when a woman could fight for a man, when he is incapable of fighting. (ie, wounded, sick, etc.)

But it shouldn’t be the norm. She should be down to defending him, and should not be rushing off to battle or leading armies.

@freed_and_redeemed

I just came back to look at Jezyk and I 100% started crying again. He was SO SWEET!!!! Oh man, I LOVED him. I think he might be my favorite. Oh and the expressio0n on his face in the aesthetic! Oh man, you’re going to kill me! I can’t believe what happened to him! I’m going to storm over there and ring Han’s neck! Ugh! How…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I just wrote 3,000 words, but you STILL owe me Captain America!!!!!

where is he!!!??

😝

@linus-smallprint

Well, if I had a physical copy of the story, I would know. But I suppose this could spoil weather or not Aaron survives. I know this is a trilogy, but book two could pick up with Sabina or someone else.

that’s a possibility.

I thought for a split second that he would end the letter like this. That would have been blunt and h…

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@theshadow

thank you!! I’m very glad it was helpful!!

@whalekeeper

switching a “damsel in distress” for a “man in distress.”

ABSOLUTELY NOT!

I don’t care how interesting that plot may be, I believe it’s plain wrong. It’s completely unbiblical and it’s against God’s design. A man who leaves a woman to fight for him/rescue him is no man. Just read the Bible and you will see God very clearly designe…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Even if I don’t use it here, my favorite trope is just a bunch of guys being an unlikely team. Which Keilah probably agrees with. 😂

I like writing guys best too. lol.

@whalekeeper

What are y’all’s thoughts on disregarding the male/female traditional tropes sometimes? Because I know religiously some people are against it. I like the idea of it, if it accomplishes interesting characterization, but I’m curious if other people approach it with more objectivity.

Do you mind explaining what you mean by this for the s…[Read more]