Ellette Giselle

2.)

@linus-smallprint  @keilah-h

Okay, here are the options so far. What do you think?

1.)

@koshka

Phew!  lol.

Rory

“Take whatever time you need kid. I’m listening.” Leo screwed the new bulb in place, squinting as it flickered on. He slipped the burned out bulb into his pocket and stepped down from the chair.

Rory still fidgeted in silence. Take whatever time I need? I need all the time in the world. He thought, bitter…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Noooo…… I don’t think so.

Aaron is the lead.

Turin was the ally.

Then Noah and Darrien became the Allies.

Joseph is the lead of the next book.

Sabina was the love interest/ally

Yeah. No one else I can think of.

I mean, Asher and Eric play more prominent rolls later on, but they had pretty small parts in this…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

That’s what I was thinking.

I’m going to try it a few different ways and then see what everyone thinks.

@linus-smallprint  @keilah-h

I know! She is fast!!

@linus-smallprint.  @keilah-h

Update.

Hey, my cover artist JUST SENT THE COMPLETED COVER!

It’s brilliant!

Anyone want to see?!?!

@linus-smallprint

Ooo, I like him!!!

I don’t know why, but this whole time I have really, really wanted one of the characters to give Stripe a hug. Like one of the little kids. It would be so cute, especially because he does not seem lie a hugs person, yet his protector side wouldn’t let him hurt a little kid. lol.

Oh that’s…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Awe! I love her!! She looks like a really sweet person, and I love the longer tunic with the pants.

@linus-smallprint.  @keilah-h

Hey, my cover artist just sent in the rough idea placement sketch. Would you care to take a look?

@linus-smallprint

Thanks so much!

@koshka

Rory: *contemplating death and destruction*

Leo: *caring but oblivious*

XD!!!!

Rory

Rory followed Leo into the empty classroom. Leo flicked on the light switch and five lights flickered one. One remained dark. Leo grabbed a chair and set it under the broken bulb. Looking up with a smile, he spoke, “Mind holding this steady?”

Rory…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I’m sorry!I feel awful!

 

Why is it that you do not trust Reedsy?

I don’t know. I just had this really bad feeling about it. I opened an account and everything, and then I backed out and closed it all down. I just didn’t feel good about it. Idk. Maybe I’m. crazy, but I didn’t like it. I actually feel safer putting the stuff…[Read more]

@koshka

Rory

Leo looked at Rory a moment, and Rory fought the urge to run. Stay calm, you’ve been trained to kill your whole life, you can take him out if he does anything. Then, another part of Rory spoke, the part he had hidden in order to stay alive. But… I don’t want to hurt him.

Leo’s voice jerked Rory out of his thoughts. “Sure. W…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thank you!!!

Well, if you can’t remember then that’s okay. lol.

@koshka

Rory

Rory slowly realized Leo was watching him. The memories that haunted him began to slide away as he forced himself to regain control. You can’t lose it! You don’t know what he’ll do to you!

He looked up and instead of seeing the expression of cruelty he was so used to, Rory saw Leo’s eyes were gentle and perhaps concerned. When he…[Read more]

@esther-c

Okay, so the first thing that’s going to hit her is the different language mixed with the crowdedness. It’s going to almost feel suffocating! She won’t be able to understand anyone, the streets are tight and narrow, the people drive recklessly, the sidewalks are also super small. there are tones of people on bikes.

Family. Okay.…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

That is so cool that he would do that for you! Your family must be quite invested in your writing!!!

@linus-smallprint

Hey, I’m afraid I won’t be able to share the full book in one piece. I don’t trust Reedsy and I can’t find any other way unless I’m missing a place where KP lets you attach files.

So, if there are some of (or all of) the questions you can’t answer because of that then that’s okay.