Ellette Giselle

I lost track of what I’ve posted and I don’t feel like going to look. Soooo, hope this isn’t a repeat.

I’m fine with it! Glad someone finally RPd!

@koshka @keilah-h @calyhuge @loopylin

Rory

Rory carefully moved so that his back was to the wall. The amount of people was starting to feel dangerous, especially since Rory could sense mots of them would be handy in a fight. He was still trying to get over the fact that strangers greeted each other…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

I love it!!! I’m so excited for the next book!! I’m literally going to get my hands on one of the VERY first copies!!!

@esther-c

I used to live there! What time period are you going for? Because I’ve also done a lot of research.

if it’s modern, what do you want to know?

@keilah-h

Okay, I’m thinking I’m gonna keep it.

Yes, but oddly enough, when a God-fearing character dies in a story, I’m not usually as sad as I am at other characters’ deaths cause they’re in heaven (even though they don’t exist lol)

SAME!! I totally know what you’re saying!!

I know!! It is so sad! They would have been such a sweet couple.…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Nice. Thank you!

I’ll take a look at that!

@linus-smallprint

I dunno. I just don’t really have any accounts.

Can you delete the Reedsy link? Is it free?

Yup. I do want to think about things before I answer, so I will be taking some time. I also will need to make School assignments, preparing a Sunday School lesson, and work a priority. If I have time, I may start going through…

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@linus-smallprint

I kinda don’t mind that you know all of that from that little end part. But would you as a reader rather not know it?

She may eventually join KP.

AWESOME!! You’ll have to introduce her to me when/if she does. That has to be soooo fun having a sibling who also writes!

Firstly, do you have a Google or Microsoft account?

Uh,…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint   @keilah-h

Okay, here are the questions I had.

Where the characters believable?

Did they have good, individual personalities, or were they clones?

What would you say was the message of the story?

What would you say my world view was?

Was there anything that seemed unbelievable or forced?

Is there anything that you w…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint   @keilah-h

Okay, here are the questions I had.

Where the characters believable?

Did they have good, individual personalities, or were they clones?

What would you say was the message of the story?

What would you say my world view was?

Was there anything that seemed unbelievable or forced?

Is there anything that you w…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

Sure, we could ask….. i don’t really care tho.

I already have him in my mind.

@linus-smallprint

Okay, scrap what I said about the covers. I 100% got off of KP and went hunting for someone to design the covers for me. I have a friend who does digital art and cover designs, and I called her up yesterday. She said she’d do it. Sooooo, you can forget about that other cover. We are getting the real one! I am doing the cover…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

FIN!!! I’m screaming with joy!!!!!!

@keilah-h

yay!! I’m glad you want to read more!!
question: what do you think of the Seven year jump forward ending?

were you sad Aaron died?

I love how that soldier–Adrian, I think?–wants to learn more about Aaron’s beliefs after he saw how brave he was before dying.

yes!! That was one of my favorite parts. Aaron’s last prayer was that God would…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Well, it just gives away some of what will happen to the characters. That’s all.

Is that a bad thing? Do you feel like it spoils too much? What can you tell me is definitely going to happen from that scene. (Just so I can gage how much it actually does give away)

As for the cover, I’m not sure what you are using to make it and…

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@linus-smallprint

btw, it won’t let me share it. It’s a PDF and I can’t get it on here.

@linus-smallprint

Wow. You make Sanderson’s books look short.

*Bows* thank you!

So why include this Epilogue in book one then?

Um, because I like it. Is it bad? I can cut it. I just felt like it was a nicer ending the Sabina crying, plus I have a seven year jump ending in the next one, and a several year jump in the last one.

(I have a f…

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@linus-smallprint

Not your fault at all. I just lost my own personal race.

Yes, I can send the whole thing in just one sec. I’m going to lock it down tho, just because KP is somewhere anyone can get onto, so you won’t be able to do anything but read. Not even copy and paste. Hope you don’t mind.

So Aaron held on to the end, and he…

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@whalekeeper

Uh… no.

My brother would most certainly not be smiling. He’d be saying, “What the heck are you doing?”

If she was going to go with him, at all, she should go as a nurse or something and work behind battle lines.

Out of curiosity, do you have a brother?

@whalekeeper

I understand your point about extremes, but I still believe there are better ways for Bonnie to show love and support.