Ellette Giselle

@keilah-h

Cool! I don’t see anything for December. There seems to be a very large gap….. so are we just repeating the December list?

@grcr

Here’s the next scene……

Jonathan gasped, partly shocked by the loud noise as the shot shattered the stillness, partly because he had felt…nothing.

Jonathan slowly dared to open his eyes. He caught a glimpse of 472 backing away toward his car, his gun still trained on Jonathan. The young soldier moved to the driver-side door a…

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@freed_and_redeemed

Thank you! Someone finally put what I was trying to say into words! (Good words I mean. lol.) I guess “hate” was too strong of a word. I’m not going to go trying to justify his actions or be the “villain lover” because he’s a “bad boy” and that’s cool. I will dislike him and hate his actions, but I agree 100% with what you’re…[Read more]

@rae

Stubborn, quick to anger, very passionate and protective…to a fault.

Obviously.

no this is really funny though, because I’m the same way.

OK, this is when you and I have been arguing this whole time and then find out we’re cousins. haha!

@linus-smallprint @theshadow @savannah_grace2009

Annnnnd the next scene!

The next morning, Aaron and Turin got up early. After breakfast began their walk to the village. Turin told Sabina to come with them, saying it was to keep her safe. Secretly he hoped she would believe when she heard Aaron speak.

When the three arrived, Aaron found…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Ah, thank you for that.

as for what just happened…… it was just some innocent girl chatter that I’m afraid you wouldn’t understand. *blinks sweetly and puts on innocent face*

@rae

Oh goodness. This is getting out of hand. lol.

Ok, I am not saying that if Hans was a person I would hate him. I’m just saying that the role as the villain that he has is not one that I find myself liking. Does that make sense?

@keilah-h

Lolol. Yeah, we have a good stream of German in us. Our family were royals in Ulm. My last name is very German. We have some Jewish, Irish, a little Italian and dutch, and some Cherokee Indian. But the strongest vain is by far German. I get my complexion from the Germans. Very fair skin, pale blue eyes and very blond…[Read more]

@rae

Watch out yourself, the 1/3 German is going to fight back, with some Irish rebel highlander and Jewish spunk.

@savannah_grace2009

For the sake of the other poor innocent KPers who are also interested in my writing, I’ll back off.

@savannah_grace2009

GUYS I THINK WYOH MOVED TO PINTEREST AFTER SHE GOT KICKED OUT OF KP

who did?

@savannah_grace2009

Is that a threat? Do that and I will give you the climax chapter and then wait FIVE MONTHS to post the rest. So there. I can play this game too ya’ know.

Ok, give me a second. or two. or three. or fifty. I have to check it over for super bad edit mistakes.

@savannah_grace2009

I can’t view your account either. It errors out like it didn’t even exist!

@savannah_grace2009

Oooo, you care about him already!!! That’s AWESOME!!!

Hmm, I think I’ll wait a day or two to post the next scene……….

@savannah_grace2009

HE HAS A TRAGIC BACKSTORY

trust me you will change your mind

maybe. I’m not so sure. Tragedy is No excuse.

@freed_and_redeemed

Hey, I tried to take another look at your author pintrest page but it’s erroring out and won’t let me look. I don’t have an account, but I was able to see it before. Any ideas?

@savannah_grace2009

well, for now I don’t like him. We’ll see after I read the book if I change my mind…..

@savannah_grace2009

Haha. You think so?

@savannah_grace2009

because, Sara, he is clearly evil. I never like the badguys, and the misunderstood villains are the LITERAL WORST so that better not be what he is. Whatever sad background he might have, that is NO excuse for him being evil, which he clearly is.

@savannah_grace2009

Awwwwww!!! So sweet! Super cute.

Only critique would be this line.

looking at her mahnith one last time, before leaving her mahnith

It’s a little repetitive. Otherwise, I love it!

Also, how old are the kids now?