@ellette-giselle
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Ooo, I like the Charles song!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
WAY BETTER!
Ok, the magic thing is a little fuzzy still. I read it over several times and I think I have a good idea to where you could fix the whole thing very simply but make it so the reader understands using magic to stop from shattering wasn’t right.
“As time went by, we grew to love the power we had and started to allow o…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Reading now. Feedback in a sec
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Honestly, that was the obligation I felt writing this, so no wonder you picked that up from reading it.
lol. It felt like it.
I think your dad has some really good advice. I would go with that.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
No problem.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Should I wait on a drawing from you, or are you planning to skip this round?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Am I getting an updated drawing from you, or would you like to use the one you already submitted?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Hmm. I didn’t want to dwell too long on it, since both the reader and Alan want to hear Charles’s story more. But I wanted to include this as well, because, like I said, a fantasy book telling you not to read fantasy books would just be weird. Perhaps I have room to fit in more here? I could also try coming back to this lat…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Hmm. I didn’t want to dwell too long on it, since both the reader and Alan want to hear Charles’s story more. But I wanted to include this as well, because, like I said, a fantasy book telling you not to read fantasy books would just be weird. Perhaps I have room to fit in more here? I could also try coming back to this later. I’m also conce…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Anyway, I think he needs some pointy ears and a ridiculous amount of equipment on his back, eh?
😠
No.
Nope.
Not happening.
lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Oh, also, I’m gonna ask someone to stop us if we get too heated. I have a tendency to do this when I really get the ball rolling. ellette-giselle If Whaley agrees, would you mind?
Yes, I can kill this if I need to, though it looks like so far y’all have kept your heads. lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I wasn’t necessarily saying that…… Well, now that I think about it I actually am saying God should be there.
See, the big issue for me was that Rae said that her character found joy and peace and I was wondering where he found that if it wasn’t from God.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I had a forum where I offered to draw people’s characters, but it kinda died. 🙁
We could bring it back to life!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Of course!! You can draw as many of my characters as you like!! One of my favorite things is seeing people’s drawings of my characters.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
It’s very good, but the whole reading fantasy seemed like you started to go into it and then pulled back and skirt5ed the whole problem. I feel like if it’s going to be there at all it needs more. At the moment it feels kinda like “Why?” If you have nothing more to say on the matter, I would consider cutting it.
Also, the fact…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I don’t think that will be too much of a problem. Aaron has stepped into a sort of parent roll with the children. (All of the young adults have.)
but seems you are heading in the direction of Aaron and Sabina getting married and being parents to Joseph.
So it seems.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Do you title your chapters or number them, by the way? Cuz I’m divided on the subject. I never read chapter titles for some reason, and just go in blind, hehe.
I actually do both. In the last book I published there was just numbers, and this one has titles. So yeah, it all depends on the story.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Thank you so much! This is great.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Is formatting tedious or do you enjoy it? It sounds kind of fun lol. Like rearranging your room.
I really enjoy it! It’s the editing that can get a little tedious. The formatting is the fun part.
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