Ellette Giselle

@whalekeeper

Thank you so much!

I’m hoping to get some of my new stuff on here soon.

@freed_and_redeemed

i just left you a little gift on goodreads!

😀

@linus-smallprint

thank you for telling me about Alcatraz. That makes sense.

I read your chapter. I like it a lot, though Eric is not my kinda guy. 😂

sooo, btw, I’m not sure how affiliated you are with military, but you do know what will happen if Alan becomes a deserter, right? He’ll be killed if they catch him.

It’s pretty unive…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I thought it was you who mentioned it.

I don’t know if you saw my question, so I’ll just ask it again. 😀

I was wondering if Alcatraz ever has some sort of redemption. I mean, I don’t want him to become a perfect character because he does good deeds, but he also kinda isn’t the best right now. I believe you and I ten…[Read more]

@esther-c

Sure! I’d love to help if I can!

@keilah-h

What! That not funny! It’s sad!!

😭😭😭

lol

@mineralizedwritings

XD yeah, I’m bad at it to.

Oh phew! Lol. Glad I’m not the only one.

Tysm! I’m glad you like him! Yeah, I drew him. That’s my oc Tauren Faulkner, I used to post art and snippets from his wip all the time when I was more active here.

I LOVE him! And that is SUCH a cool name!!!

@keilah-h

I’m glad you put the takeover-by-the-empire subplot back in. I was kinda wondering if you’d forgotten it lol

No, I haven’t forgotten. This book moved way faster previously, but people keep telling me to add things so now I feel like it’s a lot slower.

Right now it’s not clear if they’re married yet or not.

what? No! They aren’t married!!

@linus-smallprint

I don’t mind extensive conversation scenes. But some others might not.maybe you could have this conversation later on, (if at all) but no pressure.

Thanks for sharing that clip!

You are very welcome! Have you seen the movie? (Courageous) If not, you really should. It’s pretty amazing. So is the movie Fireproof, which is my all…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I’m sorry, I can’t help you much here. I’ve never done this. Maybe you could ask your dad?

Haha! Well I didn’t expect help on that part!! lol.

I would like the scene where Aaron goes up to Sabina and asks her about marriage and see the conversation they have.

Ugh. You would say you wanted me to write that scene.

Grrrr. Okay,…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thank you!

Oh he’s about to have a much worse time. He brakes his leg when he lands, gets into a gunfight, and then is captured by the most sadistic villain ever.

😀

@rae

It’s tipping down so the tail will hit the ground first. He was trying to go up to escape the shelling but he wasn’t fast enough. it’ll start flipping as it goes down, but for now the engine killed and it’s falling.

does that make sense?

@linus-smallprint

(In other words, is he trying to be disciplined in fighting his worry, but forgetting to be dependant on God to help him (which seems quite likely since he is struggling with doubt itself))

100% Yes.

I know I’m not much of a romance guy, but even I wanted to see this in developed scenes instead of a summary. I want to see t…

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@linus-smallprint

Nah, just call him Alan. That’s his name after all. I mean, people don’t refer to you as “The Canadian” or “The guy with the wired way of measuring fences” or, “The guy with a part time job” lol.

They call you Justin, or Linus. those are your names/nicknames/online-names. but they are still your names.

Just call him Alan.

I…

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@keilah-h @linus-smallprint

OK, I’m back. new section, and would really love feedback on this because It’s still in a stage where I would be wil;ling to change or tweak things.

It was a long week of prayer before Aaron spoke to Sabina about the idea of marriage. Sabina was very surprised, but Aaron had never seen her so joyfully since her…

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Here’s one I did for one of my books. This is Even, my pilot. He’s not having a great day at the moment. But I sure love the angle!!!

@linus-smallprint

PS.

Any thoughts on my music styles? lol.

@linus-smallprint

I liked this!! I don’t know if I mentioned this yet, but when you refer to Alan as “the soldier” it kinda throws me, especially since 1) he has a name that we know, and 2) this is something you kinda just started.
other then that, no complaints.
(I notice you use a lot of British spellings. I’m guessing that’s Canadian?…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

ack!! My old nemeses— facial hair! I can never do it right! It always ends up looking like charcoal smears.

I’ll try, but I’m gonna murder this fella’s face!

yeah, we’ve been doing two weeks.