@ellette-giselle
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
In a shorter sentence, you like the drawing itself, but it looks nothing like Friedrich.
it looks kinda like him………….:D
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Here you go, my two faithful readers! 😀
The next morning, Aaron met Sabina in the hall. Noah was with him, so he felt comfortable talking to her. “Sabina, can I speak to you a moment?”
“Of course,” replied Sabina. “Is everything alright?”
Aaron nodded. “Last night, Joseph came to me and asked if he could stay he…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Never be surprised if a song I provide is from a video game. Most of the music I listen to is from video games.
That’s just sad. You need to broaden your music listening habits. You are missing out on some of the greatest composers in history! It’s…. it’s like eating PBJ for every meal. Every day!!! If you need some good…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Woah, wait… wow. Thank you! 😄😄
You deserve it!! Man, you are super good!
Ohh… ok. I was concerned about that…
Honestly it looks exactly like the military uniform of his kingdom, which is sho0cking because I never told you what it looks like. lol.
You described him having ‘chin-length hair’, so I looked that up for me…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I’lllet anyone else have a chance. Tomorrow I’ll come back and snipe you again.
If you survived today and didn’t kill this post. lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Well if you’re still alive…. I did another 500.
You messed with a speed writer girl. That was a bad idea.
I will leave you alone now if you want.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
You told me to. *shrug*
Btw, I have some other miserableness things you could do if you get tired of the plank.
Oh, I wrote 500 more words while you were busy with all that. Should I post them!!?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
HERE YOU GO!!! NOW DO A PLANK!!!!
Ethan followed his brother, and the two wormed there way through the small entrance into the fort. Ethan sat up and saw that Jonas was looking in an open cardboard box. “Hey, I remember this!” He pulled out a flashlight and tossed it to Ethan.
Ethan raised his eyebrows. “Dad gave me this on my tenth…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic HELP WANTED! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I have work today, but I’ll try to read this as soon as possible!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@rae @linus-smallprint @grcr @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h
Okay y’all! Here I go.
Min
So one thing would be Friedrich is not left-handed, but I never specified that so that’s on me. His hair isn’t quite a wavy as I pictured, but otherwise he’s pretty spot on. I like the boots, though not quite the style I was thinking of either. Your shadin…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
My dad is a “mechanic by necessity” as he likes to say.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Ikr! My dad loves that one. So do my brothers.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Alright then!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
That’s because I forgot about that one.
HAHA! that makes sense. I was trying to figure out what you changed. lol.
Just for fun, if either of you has soundtrack suggestions for my book, let me know.
ooo, will do!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Ooo, I like the Charles song!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
WAY BETTER!
Ok, the magic thing is a little fuzzy still. I read it over several times and I think I have a good idea to where you could fix the whole thing very simply but make it so the reader understands using magic to stop from shattering wasn’t right.
“As time went by, we grew to love the power we had and started to allow o…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Reading now. Feedback in a sec
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Honestly, that was the obligation I felt writing this, so no wonder you picked that up from reading it.
lol. It felt like it.
I think your dad has some really good advice. I would go with that.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
No problem.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Should I wait on a drawing from you, or are you planning to skip this round?
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