@ellette-giselle
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
On a side note, I regret to share the recent passing of one Black Mongoose.
Oh that is great! That is so great!
These are the reasons I keep my laptop locked any time I get up.
I have two brothers.
RIP @power
Actually, don’t rest in peace. You don’t deserve to rest in peace after such dastardly…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
It’s good. I like it.
I feel like Alan should have been a bit more remorseful in the end. It felt more like he tried to snitch a cookie and got caught more then he was using black magic. idk. I would have liked a repentance prayer, maybe a few tears, idk. It just didn’t feel real to me. *shrug* that might just be…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Um, not at all their characters, but that’s funny itr makes you think of them.
Lol, That’s funny the David one makes you think of Alan. (Isn’t the hair wrong?)
I wonder if that’s really going to be a problem when you are reading the book straight through, because William is introduced literally only two scenes…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
sounds good!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
Yes! These are just what I have running through my mind and never put on paper!
My dad was in the military and is now in law enforcement and one thing he always says is, “When I get shot, I’d rather have A guy carry me out then a woman try to drag me out and end up getting us both killed.” He’s a very tall, muscular guy, and I honestly…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 5 days ago
OH HE WOULD LOVE THAT!
(I would love that!)
That could be funny. And crazy. And possibly dangerous, so maybe we shouldn’t.
It would be so good! We should! We should!
I’d find it far more interesting to RP then a public school anyways. I like it much better, and it’s way better for Rory.
Besides, technically Rory is already g…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
I’m referring to the women in battle thing.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
I doubt Rory’s going back to school. I don’t know how I’d RP school life after this. 🤣
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Well, I’m glad to find someone who does agree. It’s a lonely stance.
Hopefully anything I said was helpful!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Rory
Rory followed Leo to where bench sat under an awning. They sat down, Quincy still tightly snuggled in Rory’s arms. He was asleep. His mouth was up against Rory’s collar and the fabric was wet.
Silvia looked like she was almost asleep, her shoulders drooping and her hands limp in her lap. Rory let his head and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Rory
Rory hefted Quincey higher and wiped sweat from his forehead with his shoulder. Quincey was getting heavy, but there was no way Rory was about to tell Leo that. She merging in him desperately clung to the boy, the one person he had ever met who was weaker and more vulnerable than he was. He had never had to protect something, and it…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Is that a threat?
I love threats!!!!
Yes, she is a lot of fun.
Much better
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
This is getting very interesting! I wonder what shenanigans will follow now they’re all together, yet I’m worried about who is getting struck next.
I’m so glad it’s interesting!
I think by now I’m in the safe zone of not having a dark-haired Aaron instead of a Joseph. With the differences in ploit between the two books, I thi…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
This was the Bible study mentioned in the section right before.
Trying to remember who William and Rose are. Was Rose William’s wife?
No, no, Will was the fellow Joseph was talking to in the inn who was also working to provide a home for his fiance.
Is that what William was supposed to say?
No. I tried to different r…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Thank you.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks, 6 days ago
Because he totally is on my side in this because he is a person who is on my side because he is on my side because he likes my side because he’s totally on my side.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION
“How can we be praying for each other?” Joseph asked as the small group sat about the living room, open Bibles on their laps.
“Rose is ill,” William said.
Joseph glanced at the empty chair beside the young man and gave him an encouraging smile.…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 weeks, 6 days ago
No problem. I have another collage friend who was attacked by a final too.
(They must be like Alcatraz’s Kittens.)
But the good news is that I don’t have any more school until January!
If you were writing something more witty, that would totally work.
Yes, but I’m not a witty writer. That’s your field.
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