@ellette-giselle
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 3 days ago
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A day passed, and then another. Slowly, Joseph was beginning to come to terms with his grief. He was beginning to spend more time praying, asking God to help him. He knew he could never be like Aaron, but maybe God would at least help him triumph over the nightmares that stole his sleep…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Look at Whaley’s post above. I think she forgot you’re with us.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 3 days ago
Because your characters remind me a lot of that book. I was wondering if that’s where you got your inspiration. I think you would enjoy it.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Have you, by any chance, read The Sinking City by Christine Cohens?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Like I said, my mind was in a weird place. Specifically in the place of a reader snacking on some yogurt-covered pretzels.
Ew.
Honestly, I have always found those things rather nasty. They taste like artificial sweetener. Or at least the ones I’ve had always do.
You can post every couple of days. I can go over a couple of…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Look, if anyone picks up the series at book two, they deserve to be confused. *shrug*
If there’s any recap I’ll put a little in the Blurb on the back. But otherwise, what’s here is what they get.
Good Grief! Book two for nine year olds! NO WAY! It is so dark!
I’m a little torn. I think most of the conversation you have i…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Hey, thank you so much for this!
Yes, that’s exactly what I’m trying to do, and I’m so glad you can see that! Makes me so happy!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 4 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Forgot to tag you in my RP above
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Leon and Julian—with Baron, Ben Gunn, Flare, and Marcellus, Everstrand edge
Leon stared at the scar, and he felt a tightness in his throat. He knew the kind of men responsible for something like this. In fact, that was why he was here. He glanced over at his friend. Julian’s face had paled, and he was clenching and u…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Ha, you’re good! I keep missing you too.
Yes, agreed. That line was actually one of my MCs main struggles in the last book. Though he didn’t realize that until someone pointed it out to him.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Yeah, well “so far” is the key term, my girl.
We’ll see.
Either way, God wants us to share Him with others. Ultimately, He knows who is going to accept that gift or not, but that doesn’t change the way we should approach it, right?
I don’t think it should, but I’ve seen some people go at it like They are the ones s…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
*cough cough*
I knew that.
*wince*
Sorry i forgot! Okay, so I have an older age range. Good.
I would definitely like some advice (maybe later on) in how to classify these books. I was thinking YA, but that could include 13 or so year olds, and the violence level in these books might be to high for that. I mean, they are kinda dark…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Kenna and Zeke’s kids!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Glad to hear that!
I wouldn’t delete this, I need it for Joseph’s arc and to really set the whole stage. But, I’m glad you liked it enough for it to be a keeper weather I can trim it or not.
Btw, completely off topic, You’re 15? Right?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 weeks, 5 days ago
Okay, that’s two against me.
Glad you like the map!!
I’ll take a look at that section and see what I can do by way of trimming a few things up………
what do you think, @linus-smallprint ?
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