Ellette Giselle

@linus-smallprint

This is one of the best ones yet!!

I’m curious, did you write this from scratch, or was it in the draft?

This was super well done, and I like everything about it. (though i did see a typo here and there.)

Very well done.

@linus-smallprint

Yes, it’s the Iliad and the Odyssey as a musicale and it was SO WELL done!

oooo, next chapter! Yay!

@linus-smallprint

BOTH!

hey, how did you know?

dun dun dun!

@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @keilah-h

LONG Section!!!!!

Darrien lost his job the next morning.

The Governor decided that if the main part of the city was rebuilt, the work could stop. This left a group of neighborhoods to the east in terrible disarray, and it wasn’t long before only thieves and war refugees inhabited them.

To e…

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@whalekeeper

YES!!!!!!

Now I feel happier that you said Ronan looks like Darcy.

@grcr

Thank you!

@whalekeeper

Wasn’t exactly what i was going for, but okay. I can see that.

Which Pride and Prejudice version? (there is only one right answer.lol)

@whalekeeper @loopylin @jonas @grcr @hybridlore @raxforge @rae

Leon and Julian– Group 1

Leon had his sword drawn in seconds, and before he engaged the first enemy, Julian was at his shoulder. For a moment it was a wild skirmish, and everything was shouts and blows in the dark.

All at once, the fight died away.

Julian wiped rainwater from his e…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Okay, well as long as it’s not bad I’ll keep it. But i will keep an eye on it. Thanks for pointing it out.

Ah. From what you said, I would expect you live on a prairie or in some other open area as well

lol. Yup. Though not so far that it was hard to visit people or have them over. That would be sad.

@linus-smallprint

I’m trying to figure out exactly when they were hurt. I think for Joseph, it was when Asher grabbed his leg, and for Asher, it was when he tumbled into the cobblestones.

Yeah, you’ve got it. But honestly, think about it. Have you ever seen boys play some wild ball/tackle/wrestle/race game? Now put that game on a cobble-stone s…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Well, it would depend on if he was serving time in the same part of the country as he’s in now. The smaller the town/city he was in, the more well known it would be. etc.

And also, what kind of job he was trying to get. If he wanted one that payed well then he would need to show his records, and then that would depend on the…[Read more]

@rae @keilah-h @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @grcr @loopylin

@rae

YES!v Show us please!!!

@freed_and_redeemed

Let’s just hope that no one knows that he’s been out of prison for around 2 years following a 5-year sentence😬

Where was he serving time?

@freed_and_redeemed

I am so glad!!!!! I know exactly what it’s like to be in a rut and then have someone throw out a bunch of ideas and suddenly have answers. Glad I could be of help

Okay, well you have two separate issues here.

German nationality is one. If Leon can prove that he was a Jew in a concentration camp, either from papers of…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Aw! I love them so much!!!!!

So sweet!

Oh, thank you so much! I need to look into that!

@freed_and_redeemed

Wow. They are gonna have trouble in life. lol.

Okay, ideas.

Leon

Most likely, Leon is going to stay away from downtown areas, bars, and maybe police stations if that makes him think of German law enforcement during the war. There were a lot of parades, dances, and celebrations after the war, and I’m pretty sure he’d not…[Read more]

@grcr

Well if you ever finish one I’d love to see it.

@grcr

Very good! I like the colors and the layout! Very eye-catching

Have you made/posted one for Marcellus yet?

@whalekeeper @jonas @loopylin @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @rae @grcr @raxforge

Leon — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Marcel, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)

“I’d be game for that as well,” Leon agreed. “Except that I don’t remember even coming here in the first place, and i definitely don’t know where to go if we got back out of t…[Read more]