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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Wow, thanks! Even got the purple eyes. Is that a crow on a horse in there? Did you put the hand in there for the his wizard scars?
You’re welcome!
Yes, that is a crow on the horse.
Yes, that is for the scars.
It feels a little too dark for Alan. It needs his bright and heroic side. I don’t see much of a desire to go on or b…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I see Eric’s taken up a new hobby, teasing everyone for any signs of love. He better watch his back if he gets a girlfriend.
Lol. No kidding.
Joseph seems to have overcome his shame over being afraid? Unless he was just distracted in that moment. But I feel if this had happened earlier, he would be calling himself a coward a…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
haha.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
do you want to RP with barns, or should we just keep going?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I felt creative so I made this for you.
I hope you like it.
It’s probably not perfect, but then again, an aesthetic is only supposed to remind you of the character, so maybe it’ll be fine.

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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I’m glad you thought so.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
*pffft*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Asher found a girl! 🥰
I know!! I’m so happy!
Eric is kinda wicked, and Noah and Darrien enjoy it way to much. lolololol
Poor Beric and Liam, though. 🙁
Yeah, I know.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I like this. It has good potential as a start. I think it really gets the reader into the plot. It’ll hook a lot more people.
I say keep it
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
How long should I give you before deciding that you must have forgotten to post your RP?
I don’t want to nag, but if you think you posted and are waiting on me, and I’m waiting on you, no one will ever post. Ya know?
lolol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION
The next morning, the adults were up bright and early, surprisingly before the children. “Amelia, why don’t you join us girls in the kitchen,” Sabina said when Amelia and Joseph appeared. “We can work on the big breakfast for the children.”
“Oh…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Vendailia is beyond.It’s not a bad idea to run the boarder, but it’s a bad idea to do it emotionally unstable and with part of a death wish, if you know what i mean.
Several soldiers already escaped by doing this.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 6 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
He’s older then them.
Believe me.That’s always the worst.
I’m glad mine are younger.
Then again, I always wanted an older brother.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
AND YOU ASK WHY I THROW SNOW AT YOU!!!??
This was AWESOME!!!!
I love this!!! I love it so much!! Ahhhhh!!! SO GOOOODDDDD!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
On a side note, I regret to share the recent passing of one Black Mongoose.
Oh that is great! That is so great!
These are the reasons I keep my laptop locked any time I get up.
I have two brothers.
RIP @power
Actually, don’t rest in peace. You don’t deserve to rest in peace after such dastardly…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
It’s good. I like it.
I feel like Alan should have been a bit more remorseful in the end. It felt more like he tried to snitch a cookie and got caught more then he was using black magic. idk. I would have liked a repentance prayer, maybe a few tears, idk. It just didn’t feel real to me. *shrug* that might just be…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Um, not at all their characters, but that’s funny itr makes you think of them.
Lol, That’s funny the David one makes you think of Alan. (Isn’t the hair wrong?)
I wonder if that’s really going to be a problem when you are reading the book straight through, because William is introduced literally only two scenes…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
sounds good!
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