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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, I will have to read that poem…but sometime when I get my strength back. Three strikes in one night might knock me out. 🙂
An earthquake opens up a crack in the ground and someone falls in.
Boy, am I going to have nightmares tonight! 😀
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Thanks! I’ve found a few places to shorten, mostly just phrases here and there, but hopefully if there’s enough it’ll cut it down a bit.
Banjo Patterson, who was an Aussie poet, wrote a poem once about a father who gets caught in a flood with his baby son. They only have one horse who will swim through the water, so the father ties…[Read more]
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@ariel-ashira @rochellaine Okay. 🙂
@dekreel Thanks!!! *wags tail ecstatically* 😀 😀 😀
*pants happily and wags tail*
Thank you so much! Umm, probably sometime within the next week…I’m about half a page in so far. 🙂
*nods and wags tail* *blinks* Yup. Speaking of which… when are you posting the next part of Jenna Trapperton? (Tapperton?…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice This time I’m not going to wake my sisters up with my laughter, but with my sniffing. 🙁 I just finished the quick reread so now I’ll go back through and try to find ways to shorten portions of it. I don’t know that I’ll be able to, though.
In the heat of the summer a wild forest fire breaks out and a camper is caught inside…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Strong Christian Women in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 years, 6 months ago
@jane-maree well, they say great minds think alike 😛
lol, yeah he just gave away his ring!
@rochellaine yeah, irreversible laws are definitely something hard to cope with
glad you’re looking forward to it!
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Wow, you have been stalking the forums for a while. It was ages ago I last posted this story. I strike again! I love making people cry 🙂
Okay! Hitting their head, falling into a river and drowning.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel Okay, if you’re sure…
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice Yes, it works. But the story’s so perfect I don’t want to cut it down at all! I’m afraid to get to the end, because I remember it and know I’m going to cry.
…falling off cliffs, for one? 😀 Want to play a game? With each post we have to think of a new way someone can die accidentally. The person who can’t think of another one…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Don’t blame yourself! It wasn’t you — believe me 😉
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Hopefully that works! I’m just back from my lunchbreak and at the editing again!
Yeah….it’s hard isn’t it? How many ways can people accidentally die?
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Joy replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@warrenluther04 WOO-HOO!! Well, done, Warren!! *jumps up and down ecstatically* I’m so excited — more Kapeefer Literature!! 😀 😀 😀
*scratches you behind ear*
Great start! I loved it! Now WHEN ARE YOU POSTING THE NEXT PART?!
*blinks* Ohhhhh, so that’s how you guys feel… XD
@supermonkey42 More awesome Compendium material!!! 😉
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Rochellaine replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@ariel-ashira 😀 I don’t mind Dekreel either. I just pretend to. Don’t tell her that…
(I think she knows, though.)
No, it’s all just a joke. 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Okay, so I was getting on here to tell you a few more things about me and what I believe, Warren, and rochellaine took the words out of my mouth! I agree with the comment she made about magic and trolls and such!
I dont mind Dekreel. 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel *frowns* *brandishes disbelief blaster* I made you disappear.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #14 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice Ooh! I’ve read this story before! Several months ago when I was still wandering around the forums without actually joining…(I think they call it stalking? 😀 )
It’s actually not on edit, but I just requested edit access, so you might consider allowing me. 🙂
Well, the first thing I thought of was car accidents. Those often en…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@ingridrd You told me once that your name was Aspen… Is it Ingrid, Aspen or Amber?!
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@kate-flournoy Mwehehehhhh…
@daughteroftheking X’D *pulls you to your feet* I knew you’d like that!! 😀
@mnvalentine Oooh, that’s a problem. Especially with this installment, anyway. XD Thank you!
@emma-flournoy Glad ya like him!
@ethryndal X’D Aww! Thank you! I thought it was funny, too
@jane-maree Yes, pizza makes heated debate…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@warrenluther04 And don’t forget about Stan! 😀 He’s a dragon too.
As for the Wonder, I love Alice and like in the original books I think of it as “anything can happen in a dream” rather than magic.
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine Okay, I remember you telling me about this a while back. I don’t think I’m planning on having magic, unless I leave bits of Wonder wandering around the Kingdom. (cameos from @catwing‘s Catwing Christmas.) Ohh…that’s why you almost disbelief-ed the troll-thing! :O Okay, that’s why you hang out with Snapper. Thanks!
I’m fine with…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@warrenluther04 Well, I’ll try my best to explain:
Most importantly, I believe in magic, and believe that all magic is evil, so that there is no such thing as “good magic.” So, if you’re planning to have that in the story I’d rather you just leave me out of it. 🙂 Mythical humanoid creatures from real-world myths, such as trolls, elves, d…[Read more]
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