Snapper

@warrenluther04. I love it!  Nice job.  And thanks for tagging me. 🙂

Oh welp. It’s @daeus . 😅

(This is an important part of the story by the way! *barks mischievously* 😀 )

Oh, @dekreel , I just made up Keeper Forest. It’s right next to Kapeeferton, I basically made it all of the green that surrounds Kapeeferton up until the Treacle Peaks. 🙂

A Dog in the Kingdom of Pen

Part 2: The Talking Squirrel

Warren Luther stared at the spot where Catwing had been hovering. A Cheshire Catwing…he hadn’t even heard of catwings before today and now there were Cheshire Catwings??? And a Sheriff named Rochellaine who doesn’t believe in Catwings or talking squirrels?

“Kingdom Pen is aweso…[Read more]

@dekreel. Can you help us out?  Or somebody?

@dekreel. OhmygoodnessohmygoodnesswowthisisSOAMAZING!!!  I just read back through all your stories on this topic!  *rolls on floor with laughter*  How could I have missed this?!  I love it!  I nearly died of laughter reading the part about the Wiser and his brother!  Oh, my!  You really make the characters come to life.  This is so awesome…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Could I beta-read? I feel like I should return the favor since you beta-read for me. 🙂

@catwing So no Grovensor until his schedule is freed up. Okay! 😀

Oh my gosh your cat is cute!!! I used to have a cat who slept behind our pillows on our bed. *fondly remembers cat*

Thanks! Umm…if you can fit them all, I’d like to at least include me, Snapper, you, Dekreel, FileWriter, and Sam and Stan. (I really hope I just gave you too many…[Read more]

@dekreel How come these just keep getting better????? This is amazing!

*suspicious tail wag* Who just beamed down??? *suspicious tail wag* 🙂

@dekreel XD This is awesome. I love how the troll just suddenly turned into this sweet lovable thing 😛

@Dekreel awwww I recognised that direct quote. *blushes*

This was the best, Dekreel. xD

@jane-maree probably general overall chapter, but also stuff like inconsistencies (which some readers have already pointed out), and yes showing/telling stuff. Thank you!!!

oops got your tag wrong filewriterbase13x , just look at the post above

@filewriter13x okie dokie! I’ll try to draw him tonight and hopefully post him by morning! 👍🏼

@dekreel XD Wait, seven people and a unicorn? Who could that be? Do we have our own Avengers now or something? 😀

I will eagerly await the next (last?) part.

@jane-maree you’re welcome, ’twas my pleasure 😉

@Jenwriter17 okay so I don’t want to go into full editor mode and scare you (been there, done that, it was bad xD) so what exactly are you looking for critique on? The general overall chapter? Or some more details like showing vs telling, etc.?

@dekreel. I love, love, LOVE it!!!  Thanks for tagging me!  I am not familiar with this topic.  Have you been posting all your stories here?

@dekreel Wow! That ending was something else!

Oops X’D  That was an epic tag failure.

@supermonkey42  KPA!! XD