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Ruth replied to the topic Anyone want to provide an opinion for my school assignment? in the forum Genre-Writing 1 year, 11 months ago
I believe that people focus on climate change too much. It’s natural for the earth to shift and change. If natural disasters linked to climate started to pop up that were more than the usual, I’d be concerned, but since that hasn’t happened, I don’t think much about Climate change at all.
Sorry if that was confusing.
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 11 months ago
You know you’re a writer when it’s after midnight and you can’t go to sleep because you have to write down the new story idea you just came up with.
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 11 months ago
Tenz is on my mind
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 11 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed I’m giving you my thoughts on your last snippet in an update because I might want to delete this later.
Firstly, when I first met Leon I didn’t like him too much (Riker and Hans always caught my attention more) but he’s growing on me.
Secondly, Leon would still feel the pain of his mother’s death. And I like that you actually…[Read more]-
@rae 💖💖💖
that means a lot to me. It means a lot to know that someone can relate to that aspect of Leon’s life/journey. Leon tends to be a little bit harder to write at times, and sometimes I worry that no one will be able to relate to him the way I’ve seen others relate to Riker
but knowing that Leon’s story can relate to others…that Leon’s…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Names not James! My bad.
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
What if you do what happened with Ilsa. We know what her real name is, but she’s called Mayfly most often. If we know both James, then if you decide too or accidently switch names we still know who you’re referring to.
Idk, I think this is a decision you need to mostly make on your own about what’s most comfortable
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 11 months ago
I’m thinking of submitting a short story to KP this summer. No promises, but it might just work out. 🙂
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Ruth replied to the topic Any tips for writing serious characters? in the forum Characters 1 year, 11 months ago
I stand corrected.
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Ruth replied to the topic Any tips for writing serious characters? in the forum Characters 1 year, 11 months ago
To help make them interesting, I like to show the weak side sometimes. You know, they’re a tough warrior but inside they long deeply for something, they just won’t admit it. With tough charries, you need to show they are human, like with any other charrie. Even if they keep emotions locked away inside, show they still have them.
Also, if this is…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
If Sef does not come back I will be gone for a week in protest!!!!!!!!
I love this charrie!
Plus, Chase just ran from detention, bit a teacher, ran away and met Sebster Gangster and Dante, then got in trouble again, then tried to run away again but ran into a wall. He’s now in serious trouble with math teacher lady, a side…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Okay, Alpha kinda likes her already…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Alpha
“So…safety first, understand?”
Alpha smiled. “Of course safety comes first, that’s why I have this bandage around my ribs and you aren’t dead right now.” Whether he was sarcastic or serious, it couldn’t be told. Alpha placed his left fist over his heart, and bowed his head to the girl. “I sincerely apologize to you,…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
I should probably get Chase going to do something…
Chase
Chase stirred, pushing away the comforting warmth of the blanket that he had curled up in. Opening his eyes, they immediately turned from green to charcol toothpaste grey. He didn’t remember where he was or why he had a bandage on his head until he saw Hannah quietly reading in her chair…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Alpha thinks that ‘press charges’ means literally pressing something similar to battery charges.
#Wondiansnotunderstandingearthlingsagain
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Alpha
“Press charges? What do you mean by that? Stars, this language and culture is confusing!” If this were a Realn, she’d just accept my apology, we’d salute and then move on. It’d be forgotten in an instant, but no, this girl has to use confusing terms!
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 11 months ago
#Wondiansdon’tunderstandEarthlings
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Aw, I like little robot companions! They’re always so cute.
Alpha
Alpha stared at her, out of a mixture of wonder (for he had never seen in his life hair as long as this girl’s) and confusion (for he didn’t know what premeditating meant.) He mumbled something in Realn to himself, trying to figure out if ‘premeditating’ meant the…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
I just found another song that is soooooo Alpha.
Whatever it takes by Imagine Dragons
That and Believer perfectly fit Alpha.
Apparently it didn’t post, but I like your charrie! She sounds great!
If you don’t like this introduction, let me know. It’s what I could think of to make Alpha notice her.
Alpha
“Speaking of combat,”…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 11 months ago
Alpha-Believer and Whatever it takes.
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Yes, and after all the entries are posted, we elect 1-3 judges who aren’t doing a story, and they decide upon a winner.
@esther-c @highscribeofaetherium
Yay! Hope to see your stories soon!
@anyone
Oh, and just a note, since we currently have two prompts open, please note which one you wrote your story for if you post your…[Read more]
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