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Ruth replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
If a zip is a real thing, I don’t know about it. A zip is like a type of speeder, but only meant for one person. Most speeders in my writing are built for two or more.
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 10 months ago
I submitted a short story to KP.
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Ruth replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 10 months ago
It is set in my sci-fi galaxy, which in that world is the same as our universe, but at the same time, I don’t believe in life on that planets or in other galaxies. Sorry, it’s confusing, but once you figure it out, it makes sense.
The reason I didn’t go into much of the sci-fi stuff is for one, I don’t lime to focus…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic WIP Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
1. Summarize your project in a paragraph or two! Like on the back of a book.
I’ve never been able to do book blurbs well, but I’ll try…
A war upon the outside and a war upon the inside.
The Nanian war has taken away almost everything from Nahim Nayhelm; his family, his home, and his faith. While seeking revenge upon the two figures he blames…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
I apologize if I missed any italicized words.
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Ruth started the topic My short story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 11 months ago
@theducktator @theshadow @loopylin @whalekeeper @grcr @keilah-h @freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @otherkppeoplewelcome
So i wrote most of this short story (titled Secret Shame) this morning. I think I might end up turning it into a novella of some kind just because I feel like it is kinda rushed. What are your…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 11 months ago
I have two choices to submit to KP, a somewhat lighthearted tale with Nahim and his family on his birthday, or a darker story with a character you haven’t met before.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Yeah, I think I did my math wrong, it should be closer to like their third movie.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Because I got bored…
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @keilah-h @whalekeeper @loopylin
This is a Chase scene I wrote a little while ago, i think near the end of last year. Sorry, it’s really cringy. Chase is around 14 or so.
Sarah Marshall brushed the brown lock of hair that had escaped her pony tail out of her eye. A…
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
I just read that scene and…I’m now gonna cry for both my boi Nahim who also was in a similar place once and Riker…and I have my own tissue box this time, so I’ll pass them to you too.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Yay! Now I need their addresses so I can send them Clover and Giraffy! Along with some hugs ofc!
And…I can’t find my tape measure and wrench…
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 11 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed Aragorn, Faramir, Legolas, Gandalf is next!
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@rae ooh, are those your favs??👀
My favs have to be Aragorn, Legolas, Pippin, and Faramir 🤍-
Actually I meant profile pic order.
My fav list is Aragorn, Gandalf, the four hobbits, Faramir, Legolas and Gimli together, Boromir.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
No, Riker needs a soft white bunny rabbit…Clover worked for me and my nightmares, she’ll work for Riker too
If Riker doesn’t get that wound taken care of in the next five minutes, I’m going to build a time machine and go back to take care of it myself! And he’s not allowed to argue!
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Ruth replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 11 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
If you noticed, I missed the deadline too. It just ended up being posted anyways because I thought I had said the 16th. Oh, well.
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Ruth replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
#relatable
The only way you ever truly know if pur pastor is near the end of his sermon is if it’s been about an hour, and he’s got this certain tone. Otherwise…well, more likely than not his “final thought before we close,” is actually a “final ten thoughts and two example stories before we close”
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Ruth replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@keilah-h @theshadow @theducktator @princesachronicle22
Fairy
Fairy strode up and stood by Silvanis, whose shoulder was a couple inches over her head. “Help me out, good people…and ducks, who or what are cheeseburgers, baseball, memes, and pumpkin spice lattes? And in which galaxy is the United States of America, and is Australia the planet…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Chase
“P-perfect!”
Chase waited in silence as Sef finished her soda. Being in a good mood, he waved goodbye to Samuel, the man who ran the shop, on his way out. Even when they wandered the streets together for about half an hour, Chase left his hood down, openly smiling. His eyes only turned dark when someone got too near,…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Here is my short story to the second prompt!
the music in the beginning is from River Flows in You by YIRUMA. The dynamics I mostly added. Enjoy!
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Ruth replied to the topic Movie Thoughts & Reviews (Anyone) in the forum Film 1 year, 11 months ago
@mineralizedwritings @esther-c
Are you talking about the 2015 Cinderella? I’ve watched that one, the original cartoon, and one when I was really little that all I remember was the step mother against a dark background. No idea the version. I wasn’t a princess girl, at least, not the way people thank of it, so I didn’t pay much attention. My idea…[Read more]
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Yay!!
Ooh, cool!
Omc that’s amazing!!! I am sure they will accept it!! <3
Ooo, can’t wait to read it!! 💛
Thanks everyone 🙂
So far, they haven’t replied.
Just so you know….they took almost three months to get back to me. So don’t panic when they take a while to email you back–it doesn’t mean they rejected your submission, they just get busy and I’m pretty sure they have other submissions to look over too.
@sara okay, thanks, that makes sense.
Ofc! I wish someone had told me that…because when I submitted mine I thought they thought mine was so bad they didn’t even bother writing back!!! So I basically panicked for three months xD