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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
It’s kinda creepy and weird, but I like writing Jep’s POV.
Jep
Jep pursed her lips, pondering. Should I let them at my prey? Just for a moment. I don’t really care about his hoodie… Besides, it might be nice to actually see his face while they do it… “Fine. You can deal with the girl, I don’t need people to watch my back. Not a b…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
Jep
“I already mess with people, why not do it with others?” She turned to the boy who had spoken. “A boy with a hoodie? Perfect. I’m looking for someone like that.” Looking at Slick, she waved dismissively with one of her hands. “Nothing romantic, don’t you worry, sweety. He’s just someone I like to…beat up.” Her cruel smile grew,…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
Guess that makes sense but GIVE HANS A CHANCE!!!! DON’T JUST SHUT THE DOOR CUZ HE’S A VILLAIN!!!!
And saddest of all, Hans never got his redemption 😭😭😭😭😭 I won’t say what happens but…poor boi never got his chance to know true love 😭😭😭😭😭
#LoveHansSquad
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
Actually I hadn’t seen your post by the time I posted mine, but I don’t find it weird…I honestly think it fits a lot.
Germans are just…annoying. It’s funny how those who don’t know anyone who is German say “I hate Germans” cuz of WWII and stuff, but those who do have German family are like “I hate Germans because they are really…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
You can hate what someone does but that doesn’t mean you have the hate them. Think about it, in God’s eyes we are all the villains, the bad people, there has been no good in us since they day we were born and will never be until His Kingdom. Yet he loves us. It’s the same with me and Hans
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
I get you don’t like the little glimpse you’ve had of my poor Hans but GIVE HIM A BREAK!!!! POOR GUY NEVER GOT TO KNOW PEACE OR FORGIVENESS!!! WHILE HE’S THE VILLAIN, HE’S ALSO THE MOST TORN!!!!!!! HAVE A HEART!!!!!
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
My grandfather is full German, born in Germany. My grandmother was part German, and so is my mom. So I’m between a quarter and almost a half German. When I was a little girl, I even had blue eyes and almost white blond hair. Now I’m technically a dirty blond, but it’s more brown.
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
I know oma and opa are for grandmother and grandfather, but great grandmother always was called Oma. Just to explain myself
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
YOU CAN STILL LOVE BAD GUYS!!!!!!!!! THAT’S NO EXCUSE
Also I’m gonna apologize now in case I go too far with this…my great grandfather was named Hans Ulrich (the CH is pronounced like a k) so I have son extra personal attachment, plus my Opa was also drafted into the army
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
Backup has arrived!!!!
@ellette-giselle @highscribeofaetherium
Watch out, the over quarter German has stepped into the room…just let me get the context of this crisis quick
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 1 week ago
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Jep (Narsa Jeptune as Judy Emerson)
Her black lips parted in a cruel, sadistic smile as she watched the boys fight. For humans they put on a good show. Though they still have much strength yet to gain. Walking up to the group, Jep put a hand on one hip. “Hello boys,” she said, with her smile still on her face. “Having a little fun…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Chase
Chase nodded. It took him longer this time to make the image appear, but he eventually did. He pictured her smiling as she stroked the bird on her shoulder. “Is it p-pretty?” He asked. “D-did I mess up?”
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RAE replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Chase
Chase shrugged, the picture swirling away into a mixture of blue and green. “I-I used to cr-create pictures for her. I j-just al-always c-could. Sh-she l-liked this one a l-lot.” His eyes formed into a bright sunset. “A-all I do is take a mem…memory and concentrate. Wh-what would you l-like to see?”
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@savannah_grace2009 @loopylin @whalekeeper
exactly. If I am portraying it wrong, I need to change it. I just don’t want to change it yet because something has changed inside of Chase, and I need to figure out what it is first. That was what I was trying to say.
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RAE replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Are you ready to post a description?
I’m sorry, I’m just excited to draw one of your charries 🙂
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@loopylin @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009
I blame all of you for the lack of sleep last night XD. Seriously, what Loopy said had me thinking.
I understand your concerns, but as of now, I’m not going to change anything with Chase and just keep him going on the path I have laid so far. The reason is there’s something different in Chase. I haven’t…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Couple RP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Sure! Come join us!
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I feel like the blindness bit was too much? I mean for Chase to give up his sight as well as his mobility. It’s too on-the-nose for Chase’s character, since he often gets marked with physical things like scars, stuttering, and the mobility thing. I felt less sorry for him, and more “oh okay that happened.”Idk, it felt like waaaaay…
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RAE replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 I have a Chase scene for you
@whalekeeper @loopylin @grcr @theducktator @esther-c @kielah-h @theshadow @ellette-giselle @anyone
I have a really sweet but sad Chase scene. For context, this is after Chase’s last battle with Narsa Jeptune.
oh, and beware, I’ve barely edited this. Criticism welcome 🙂
Chase…
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