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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Yeah…Alpha’s probably the most messed up…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Hehehe Alpha has more knives than social skills
Yep lol
Though, Dante better tread carefully, he has struck a nerve.
Alpha
Something dangerous flashed in Alpha’s eyes. “In no way is it stupid,” He growled. “Think for a second how you would fear such things if you were created in a lab. How would you feel if such things gave you life…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@loopylin np
Alpha
Alpha blinked. “No, not exactly. I’m a warrior, so I fight wherever in the stars they want me this time. Only time I ever thought of assassination was with some of those annoying lords in the Council, but if I did that, they’d probably lock me up again. And that’s no fun. I think they like sticking me with needles.” A shudder…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I will need to clear this up in the story i guess. I didn’t mean all the laws, I meant more the changes in that we no longer have to sacrifice animals because Jesus came as the ultimate sacrifice. The laws changed in little ways because Hope had finally come, we didn’t have to wait for it.
I will make this clearer in the text,…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@kielah-h @ellette-giselle @raxforge @whalekeeper @hybridlore
This is the final part of Story 9.
In my writing document, I named this story temporarily as ‘Delirium’ but I would like some better title ideas if you can give me some. Thx in advance.
Five days had passed since Baron had been taken to the Handel mansion and his symptoms…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I bet if i made Dante bored enough, he’d sneak into the school and pretend to be a student for the day. That would be fun.
lol
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Alpha
Alpha shrugged. “She put a kid in the hospital, and thought she could take care of me too. So I stabbed her. And yes, I do often stab people.” Alpha paused, thinking about what he had just said, for the first time considering how his audience would take that information without context. “Though, it’s not just because I’m bored.…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 months, 2 weeks ago
speaking of jews, what are your honest thoughts on them? Like how to you see them?
I believe they are God’s people, and that the promises God made still apply. I don’t believe that the Church is the new Israel.
Other than them being God’s people, I don’t stand behind them. They support the lgbtq+ community last I heard, and I…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 months, 2 weeks ago
What do you react to finding out that an artist you like begins to do wrong things. (Like a draw and art piece disrespectful to God, or Jesus. Or makes a song about demons and worshiping them or something. Any range of “art”)
I recently dealt with this in a way.
At my 2024 piano recital, a student of my piano teacher pla…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I’ll be praying
I think he’s more concerned that he can’t flex his abs. *Rolls eyes*
lol, he sounds awesome
Praying!
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Ruth started the topic Writing Fight Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Hello!
So, I’m currently gearing up to write a fight scene (I’ll post it on here when I’m done) and I’ve never been happy with my previous fight scenes, so I researched a little deeper into the specific type of battle I wanted this to be. While attempting to write the probable failure of a fight scene, I got the idea to create this topic on…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
🎉🎉🎉🎉
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
lol
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
If you’re worried about that, you’ll be 100% fine.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
and Baron goes for it. 🤣🤣 that was the bluntest declaration of love I’ve seen in a while. 😆
Good section. One of your best, honestly. I’m starting to really feel your characters!
lol, yes
I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Don’t get too attached or you may hate me for ete… -
Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Alpha
Alpha chuckled. “Honestly, not much else. I’ve been bored out of my mind, hence playing with the knife.” Alpha’s hand glowed and he made the knife travel around the room before hovering over his shoulder again. “From getting stabbed in the lung to not having anything to do, life is crazy,” Alpha commented with a sigh, making his…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
@raxforge (you haven’t read this one yet) @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @hybridlore
So, I haven’t finished this one yet, but it’s getting long so I’m gonna post it in two parts.
Also, I posted a section of this story above, and I will be making that section bold so that those who already read it can skip with ease.
With that, i…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 3 months, 2 weeks ago
I just realized that the reply I wrote for you didn’t post. Sorry.
He caught pneumonia, at least, that’s what I wrote his symptoms to fit, I never officially name it in the story.
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