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Koshka replied to the topic Cover Art Sharing Space/Critique in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
That makes sense. I think it will too, once everything’s filled out.
That would be a fun workshop! I know it takes a lot of work to get all that right in any type if art. But it’s so rewarding…
I’ll have to put it on here as soon as it’s done. Thank you for sharing yours!
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Koshka replied to the topic Cover Art Sharing Space/Critique in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 9 months ago
Good layout. I would move the Prince of Walfklau scroll up to the top of the page (if that could be done without blocking any of the cover details. Then again, I don’t know.) Otherwise I think those look great! The sense of distance and plains is right as far as I can tell. I like the depth, with your angles lining up. Um,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 9 months ago
It’s fine! =)
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
I think it ate my tag.
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
I’ll have to do something like that… Soon.
How long have you been writing verse? My first ‘poems’ were practically sets of rhyme and meter with nothing much in the way of meaning. They were TERRIBLE!
Maybe that’s why I don’t like jellybeans.
Ooo, that’s hard. I’ve read so many good books. Maybe Myles and Gascone from Men Of Iron, Shasta,…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@annabelle
Hello there! I am Koshka, or at least that’s what I’m called around here. *gasp* Another Homeschooler… Hi!
You are publishing your first book? Awesome! I have yet to complete ONE of my many story idea, so not even close to where you are.I love poetry too, both writing and reading. My verse is rarely as direct as your Reading Poem.…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 9 months ago
Is this better?
Here voices scream, ‘You’re still in pain,
This Dream and Hope are all in vain.’
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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 9 months ago
Thank you! My verse is just starting to feel right, if that makes any sense.
The voices are saying that. Would removing the punctuation clear that up, or do I need to do something else?
(YES, the author appreciates it very much!)
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Lin replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@avacoulter I literally just watched Markiplier try aerial silks, haha. It looks really cool!
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Lin replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@annabelle I have a younger sister, but that’s it, haha.
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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 9 months ago
Are there any things you would change?
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Koshka replied to the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @jodi-maile
Thank you! I loved writing it.
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Koshka started the topic Sing of Tomorrow in the forum Poetry Critiques 4 years, 9 months ago
Song/poem I just wrote. I don’t know if it’s any good. It would be sung be a captive.
Sing of Tomorrow
My yesterday was full of fears,
Today is always drenched in tears,
But I’m still singing-
I want to see Tomorrow again,
Show me Tomorrow again.
The years have slowly ground away,
And night was gaining day by day,
Yet I kept…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@annabelle Yess, plus with pen and paper it’s more transportable.
Wow, that’s a lot of siblings! Are you the oldest or…?
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Lin replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@annabelle Oh, nice! I was homeschooled as well. And I still hand write a lot of things, for some reason.
It sounds like you guys make a good team! How many siblings do you have?
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Lin replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@avacoulter Sounds like maybe you’re up for a novellette or novella, haha.
What other things are you into?
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Lin replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@annabelle Well, I am pretty old, so it matches up in proportion XD
Wow, does your whole family do writing-related activities?
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Lin replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@annabelle Nice, nice! I’ve been playing piano for almost thirteen years now, and my teacher assigns me classical music, but I like playing pretty songs I hear.
Do you have any other projects you’re working on, (or plan to work on) after Identity?
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Lin replied to the topic Hello!! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@annabelle Heyy and welcome to the Kingdom! I’m Linyang, though most here call me Lin. Nice to meet you!
Identity sounds fascinating! Are you going to be self-publishing it?
I also play piano! How long have you been playing?
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Lin replied to the topic Heyyy in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 9 months ago
@avacoulter I’ve written/am working on a ton of projects right now, short stories, web fiction, novels, novellas… I like short stories because they’re quick and you can have instant satisfaction of finishing them, but also I tend to only write short story beginnings and nothing else, which is annoying on my part, haha.
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