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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
(Majorly making this up as I go, because 13 year old me struggled with descriptions even more than I do now, and was cringingly cliche about some things.)
Zoe
“[Nic]? [Ric]? Where are you?” She whispered the words, her terror strangling her voice to almost nothing, but her desperation forcing them out. Voices echoed through the large room of the…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon cuz we can always defeat him and yeet him out of the castle XD
maybe he doesn’t own it, but he found it and was like “OH HEY FREE STRONGHOLD!! YA KNOW XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
OOH I LOVE THIS IDEA where it’s actually like “his” castle kind, but like he’s using it as a stronghold and he hasn’t just “appeared there” so ye…that’s awesome cuz we kinda needed someone for the brothers to fight ROFL
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EmilySF replied to the topic I need help, please! in the forum Plotting 4 years, 4 months ago
I am hoping that I can write this well, and will be spending much time on completing it and perfecting it in the expansive future. 🙂
Is your MC dying just because he won’t defend himself/kill someone, or because he sees that Anti isn’t ready to die/has something he needs to do. Obviously someone willing to murder isn’t ready to die, b…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon poor Viktor XD
ALRIGHTY SO LETS GET THIS SHOW ON THE ROAD!!!
….SOMEHOW 🤣
Arabella & November
They’d been walking for a while, opening different doors only to reveal more hallways, or various rooms that didn’t seem to get them any closer to their destination: outside. November hoped the brothers weren’t getting…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
It is interesting though, Zlatan’s story is set up a little different as although there is a ‘villian’ who initiates most of his problems, Zlatan is his own antagonist.
His name btw, means ‘Golden one’.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka yea I’ve got trauma….XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
BONIFER SQUOON SHRIEK…..*throws stuff against the wall and throws tantrum!!!*
I. LOATHE. HIM.
I how can he be LESS NICE?!?! Bonfire squoon is a sick monster….
ahem….anyway….those books crushed my soul, ignore my rant.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Aw, poor girl. That does sound like a good plot point.
Do I do that? Nah, only have major ‘what is truth?’ and ‘what have I done?’ issues planned for my MCs, so nothing overly tramatic. XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka yea, As of rn, in book one I’m thinking when that happens it leads into Ara’s dark moment. She already struggles with insecurity but when November gets hurt and she feels it’s because of her, and then it’s opens her up to all these feelings of hate and anger it kinda brings her to her low point.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I noticed those color combinations had some sort of effect on her. The puzzle pieces are clicking.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka yay for skirts!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
And cheers for skirt-girls!(being one myself) I’m relishing that.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka also Corvina means Raven-haired, that’s why her name is corvina (: kinda random fact but yea lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka YES that was the black hair thing! I’m glad u picked up on that!!
so Corvina’s the one who scratched November, in her Raven form. And it was actually supposed to be Ara but November pushed her away. And November and Corvina was greatly affected by it due to a spoiler later in the books…..so the blood red cape, and his hair, and he wa…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
She’s great!
Oohh, so that’s why Ara was so flumuxed by Zlatan’s black hair. Hmmm, many those two should meet. Zlatan with charcoal black hair, golden eyes, and a mildly-pessimistic-yet-somehow-idealistic nature, and your dear antagonist Corvina whith her whole set of problems. Especially if Elishavet’s villian gets in too.
This…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Corvina
It got old. Quick.
Where the girl went, she went. First that…garden and then that circus, and now here.
And did Eder bother to fill her in on where here was? Of course not.
She stuck her tongue into the side of her cheek, annoyed. Her fingernails scraped against a rotting piece of metal that held fast to the lantern holder. It fel…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I volunteer as tribute! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
Welcome elf! *deep curtsey* I am Koshka, a cat, though I believe we may have already met.
However you have not met she-who-I-am-also, Limmeth, a five foot wood elf.
*Steps out from behind tree*
*Glances about gripping longbow*
*Pulls hood low and darts up tree*
I write historical fantasy and poetry with the occasional…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
what ya think?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
SO, meet…Corvina. My dear sarcastic girl. She is 16, has Raven black hair, blue-grey eyes, wears black, (btw all my female characters wear skirts and dresses XD) and a black cape. Also, she’s a Shifter. A human with the ability to transform into an animal.
she can transform into a Raven.
She also has some limi…[Read more]
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