Denali Christianson

@godlyfantasy12

Yes! XD I think they figured that out pretty quick.

This next one would probably be a good place for them to meet up with someone, whether Sofia or Lyn and Nyx.

Vulkasin and Zlatan

November stared at the strip in his hands with something approaching horror.

Zlatan didn’t notice.

Vulkasin desperately tried not to laugh,…[Read more]

@koshka also whenever they meet Jocelyn and Nyx I feel like Vulkasin is gonna get along GREAT with them and Zlatan’s just gonna be like

Oh my land….what….?

I srsly love these brothers. And their relationship with each other is great. I also love Vulkasin’s kinda teasing nature. I think he’d kinda be funny with November especially cuz both of them can already probably sense November has an OBVIOUS crush on Ara

meanwhile Ara’s oblivious….always oblivious Ara…. 🤦…[Read more]

@koshka XD 😂

@godlyfantasy12 and THAT is another reason why I must have my MC die: so I can use this scene. (But I was already planning on having him die, anyway, because that was the beginning idea of this WIP: to write a story from a mentor’s pov and still have him die.) ANYWAY… Thank you!!!

@godlyfantasy12

That’s such a perfect description of Vulkasin! (And their marching rations, hahaha)

Now for my part…

@emilysf OH MY GOSH THAT IS STINKING AMAZING!!!!!!

@koshka

November

For a second….November was positive Vulkasin was going to suggest them actually eat horse. He blanched.

Thankfully, Zlatan had interrupted him.

“The buteries vill be either on ze lowest level of zees ‘ouse, or in a separate building.” He said. November frowned and glanced at Ara.

Buteries? 

Ara mouthed a single word- Fo…[Read more]

“@elishavet-pidyon OH BOI OCRAN BE MAAAAAD BRUH XD

Jocelyn & Nyx

”Maybe give me a bit more warning next time before TOSSING ME INTO THE AIR?!”

”Sorry, love.” Jocelyn chuckled. “Though your expression was priceless!”

Nyx pouted. “You could’ve filled me in!”

“Umm, when exactly?” She asked. The two were steadily running down the hall,…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon hey I’m gonna copy and paste from your post so it don’t get confusing and so I can put Nyx’s sentences in the italics k?

Zlatan and Vulkasin

At the mention of food the lad’s eyes nearly doubled in size and Ara’s laugh sounded alongside a soft rumble. She smiled at Novembré. “I’m honestly not sure.”

Why didn’t I think of this? Zlatan glanced down the Corridor to the last light slit they had passed. Darkness. How long had  it been?

Novembré had turned red again,…[Read more]

@emilysf

Corvina

Corvina went to take a step when Zoe’s voice made her halt.

“I don’t know who is here. I don’t know how to stop people, in this shape. I search better when I have shifted, and I fight in that form, too.” The girl was trembling now. “But, please! Tell me what to do! I don’t understand what–what you want when you don’t tell me!…[Read more]

@elishavet-pieyon OH THANK THE LORD

@koshka

(I know!) You’re welcome.

Thank you! I hope that it will still be after I butcher it in the writing process. XD But, that is what the other drafts after the first one are for. Heh.

@godlyfantasy12

Imma just share the only scene I’ve actually written for that WIP I’ve talked about and asked for some help with. So, here ye go, and lemme know what you think!!

The phoenix rose from ashes of his body, drawing all heat to itself, growing larger as it rose into the sky, leaving behind icy stillness.

Stoke watched from the hil…

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@emilysf

Yes! (Why is it so hard to find the right words sometimes?) I shall store that phrasing up for next time. Thank you! =)

Oo, your books sounds good!

(grrr, KP swallowed my posttttt!)

(lets see if I can get this to work.)

This’s what’s called a ‘mood board’ for the MC of my own oldest WIP.

@koshka

(ah, well, I tried.) I understand that sort of pickiness. I sometimes am the same way, but in order to finish a book/series.

So, you mean different ‘levels’ of conflict, like physical conflict, mental conflict, and spiritual conflict, then, probably. My WIP does have more than just one of those (and possibly all three, depending on…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Zoe

Corvina studied her for a few minutes.

“Fine with me,” she shrugged, but Zoe felt her eyes studying her. Picking her apart. Dissecting her, like Malcolm did every time. Perhaps even reading my thoughts. She let her eyes fall, ashamed.

“I suppose you won’t be much help if I don’t tell you what I’m doing here, hm?”

Ord…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

NOOO!!! It posted my RP and I edited it and it deleted it!!! Did u happen to get the email of it by any chance? If so can u plz copy and paste it on here because it was long and I don’t want to rewrite it 😭