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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Aw, poor girl. That does sound like a good plot point.
Do I do that? Nah, only have major ‘what is truth?’ and ‘what have I done?’ issues planned for my MCs, so nothing overly tramatic. XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka yea, As of rn, in book one I’m thinking when that happens it leads into Ara’s dark moment. She already struggles with insecurity but when November gets hurt and she feels it’s because of her, and then it’s opens her up to all these feelings of hate and anger it kinda brings her to her low point.
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I noticed those color combinations had some sort of effect on her. The puzzle pieces are clicking.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka yay for skirts!!!
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
And cheers for skirt-girls!(being one myself) I’m relishing that.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka also Corvina means Raven-haired, that’s why her name is corvina (: kinda random fact but yea lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka YES that was the black hair thing! I’m glad u picked up on that!!
so Corvina’s the one who scratched November, in her Raven form. And it was actually supposed to be Ara but November pushed her away. And November and Corvina was greatly affected by it due to a spoiler later in the books…..so the blood red cape, and his hair, and he wa…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
She’s great!
Oohh, so that’s why Ara was so flumuxed by Zlatan’s black hair. Hmmm, many those two should meet. Zlatan with charcoal black hair, golden eyes, and a mildly-pessimistic-yet-somehow-idealistic nature, and your dear antagonist Corvina whith her whole set of problems. Especially if Elishavet’s villian gets in too.
This…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Corvina
It got old. Quick.
Where the girl went, she went. First that…garden and then that circus, and now here.
And did Eder bother to fill her in on where here was? Of course not.
She stuck her tongue into the side of her cheek, annoyed. Her fingernails scraped against a rotting piece of metal that held fast to the lantern holder. It fel…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I volunteer as tribute! in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 4 months ago
Welcome elf! *deep curtsey* I am Koshka, a cat, though I believe we may have already met.
However you have not met she-who-I-am-also, Limmeth, a five foot wood elf.
*Steps out from behind tree*
*Glances about gripping longbow*
*Pulls hood low and darts up tree*
I write historical fantasy and poetry with the occasional…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
what ya think?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
SO, meet…Corvina. My dear sarcastic girl. She is 16, has Raven black hair, blue-grey eyes, wears black, (btw all my female characters wear skirts and dresses XD) and a black cape. Also, she’s a Shifter. A human with the ability to transform into an animal.
she can transform into a Raven.
She also has some limi…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Oh….mine is definitely fun….😏
Althought she definitely has those moments where she goes mad and ur like “OH U POOR TORMENTED THING” and then she goes back to her sarcastic little pessimistic self.
I just dunno if she can hold over a huge plot against everyone on her own. See her role in the books is mainly she works f…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I have a villian, a horrible villian who was literally inspired from a history book, but he may not be a good, ah, antagonist for this castle, as I know practically nothing of his character besides the stone and ice shell he has apparently become. No, he can never be redeemed. In fact I believe he is executed in the end for war…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
So, I have an antagonist but…I call her an antagonist and not a villain. Because I’m the very end of the series she is redeemed but yes she is the “bad girl” and not sure if she could hold a whole like plan for everyone on her own, but she might could “team up” (not that she works well with others 🤣) with another villain while at the Charrie cas…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka ROFL I feel that.
HERRRMMM.
OK @denali-christianson whenever u come back
yall….someone needs to introduce a villain eventually….because at some point we’re all gonna find each other and…then what??
Also @denali-christianson can u tell us kinda a few things they do on story embers? I went and looked but…the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
Ok course, at this point I have no idea what to write…so you have any?
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
I have time!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@emilysf POOR ZOE!!! Yikes!! Sounds like she’s had it rough!! Tho some of my charries have too soooooo lol
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 4 months ago
@koshka, btw u can go on and write another scene. U can write a longer scene if u want. Or we can write back and forth if you have time
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