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Lin replied to the topic If Hollywood adapted your novel… in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@valtmy Change all the races of my characters for the sake of diversity (though idk why they would my MC is Asian), adding a love triangle (or three), change the ending (by making it happy isntead of vague and tragic and open), and adding a lot more daddy issues than I originally intended there to be.
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Koshka replied to the topic Age Gap in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
That is sweet and good. I’m enjoying hearing about their story.
Oh, Paxton, Luna. I feel so sorry for you. Your author needs to give you both a big hug. (Pretends my charies have no trauma)
If you ever want to rant about your books, feel free to tag me!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@koshka @emilysf @elishavet-pidyon HERE I AM! WOO LOL
November
“Run.” Zlatan’s voice was sharp and strong. Commanding. November’s eyes widened as the footsteps outside the door grew and a pounding thud sounded, like a knock.
He gripped Ara’s hand, squeezing it tighter then he probably should have, and rushed down the hall Viktor and Alyona had…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
She has red hair, blue eyes, and wears a suit similar to the one Elektra wears in her 2017 run of comics, except instead of a red cloth over her mouth, she wears it over her eyes, like Matt does in the first Netflix season of Daredevil.
Also, I forgot to mention that, somewhere in all her life happenings, she accidentally took a jaunt over to 616…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
(Prepare for a massive character intro…)
Milla Murdock is the daughter of Matthew Murdock, alias Daredevil. She has his red hair and blue eyes, and also inherited his Daredevil powers from him, except the range of her power is turned WAY up, and with her hearing alone, she can locate anything or anyone on earth. (If she concentrates, she can…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
ALL the secrets? o.o Now I’m a little more nervous and excited!
I’m not the biggest fan of all the main characters, but they are very good, and it’s really only Sophie I can say I have any real problems with.
I don’t know if worldbuilding is my strongest suit, tbh, but I LOVE it and honestly, I sometimes prefer it to the actual…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Side Characters (FP,WS) in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
This is the one about the mentor MC, yes.
I should probably explain a little further.
MC struggled with self-doubt. As a double gifted (and the only one ever), he believes that he has a responsibility to make big changes to the world. But, he doesn’t know how he is supposed to do that, especially since there is nothing really b…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Age Gap in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
I really like it because, while he’s still so young and it’s soooo stinking cute and adorable, it also shows the more mature side that my charries have (they have been thru a lot)
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Age Gap in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
@koshka aww thank u!! And yes, what you said about the walking thru trials and stuff really does fit my charries, including these kids, even tho they’re young, after learning this Paxton becomes more Courageous and actually ends up standing up for Luna in some scenarios (even when she doesn’t realize it) and because of his past and character tha…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Age Gap in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
That actually sounds really fun! And as for the age gap, that isn’t a problem. My Grandmother is older than my Grandfather, and there’s a nine year gap between my parents, but seriously, age gaps aren’t a real problem (obviously if God intended), some people simply need someone older/younger than them.
And I love the idea of an…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic Age Gap in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
Hey y’all! So, I’ve got a question and wanted some advice! I know we’ve got some romance writers, and while I’m not really looking for “romance” I am looking for some advice and figure some ppl could help me, specifically @gracie-j maybe? GRACIE CAN U HELP ME?
Okie so…before we start here is some disclaimers…
1. What I’m looking for is ad…[Read more]
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EmilySF's profile was updated 4 years, 3 months ago
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EmilySF started the topic Side Characters (FP,WS) in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
SO, I have two side character (or three) that I need to develop a bit more.
(This is for the story I was asking about the death of a character, if anyone remembers that… the WIP acronymed FP,WS.)
So, the MC has two students he’s teaching.
The theme is about changing the world and how you change the world in a meaningful way.
I already know…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Have you ever written a sad ending to a story? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 3 months ago
I have written a short story/novelette with a tragic ending. At least, I’m pretty sure it qualifies as a tragic ending, but it is more of a poetic justice sad ending.
The story end with a pirate captain’s 4 year old daughter getting amnesia and disappearing, and him getting super depressed and drunk, but at the very end he decides to go looking…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
@unsung I realized I forgot to answer a question so:
And do you sometimes feel that you’re the glue that holds your family together?
I sometimes feel like I’m the one keeping lots of things in order, in my family. I have seen that when I don’t do the dishes or skim the milk, no one does, so it doesn’t get done, so things back up, and conside…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@eloshavet-pidyon @koshka hey y’all, I apologize for not RP-ing. I’m on Vacay and haven’t been in the mood to heh. I know that’s a bad excuse (the not feeling like it 😂) hope y’all can forgive me and wait a bit longer?? If not let me know
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
No, I should have tagged you, and I meant to tag you, but I must have forgotten to reran you after accidentally reloading the page. 🙂
LOL interesting! why the Vatican? And do you sometimes feel that you’re the glue that holds your family together?
The Vatican because: first, I’m a Catholic; second, I’d love to see what all goes on in it…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Hey, I love to write in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
Ah, forgiveness and trust together can be quite powerful. Have you ever read the Promise of Zion series by Robert Elmer? It’s centered around the creation of the Israeli State, and those are a couple of the themes.
The map style is based off folklore, each object made up of others (example: a mountain is, if one looks close enough,…[Read more]
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Unsung replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
Oh dear me! I did not realize you had answered! Forgive my tardiness!!
Oh wow! That stable is close!
I dream every night. Well, at least it’s very rare that I don’t dream. I don’t mind it too much, but aobut 50%of my dreams are either off-putting or nightmares, so… XD
Yep, ants totally count! And I never even thought of Dolphins, but…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Have you ever written a sad ending to a story? in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 3 months ago
@kathleenramm A lot. Well, not sure. Most of my endings are bittersweet; in fact, I can’t think of a single fully happy ending. But there was one story (that I think you’ve read?) where every single character loses everything and there’s no way to recover that, and it was the result of all their own choices throughout the story.
Still one of my…[Read more]
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