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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @koshka
Milla
The boy and girl rushed for the warm firelight, stopping once they had reached it. The boy drew his sword, clumsily but bravely. The girl lifted a torch from its place and held it up, casting a circle or warm light around the two of them. Milla hesitated in the darkness as the boy…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@emilysf @godlyfantasy12 @elishavet-pidyon
Hi!! I’m back, but warning now, I may have to disappear again in the somewhat near future.
Zlatan and Vulkasin
The corridor was dark, the small oil lamp bright in his hand. Shadows swayed to it’s flickering flame.
Which way led to the brother and sister?
“Nyx,” Zlatan turned to the little fox. He…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
She is. Milla is from a Daredevil fanfic I wrote after reading all the Daredevil comics and the MC2 comics. I love comic Daredevil, but I really wish he’d settle down and start a family, because that’s be cool and he needs it to keep him from all the things he’s doing nowadays.
So, Mills’s fanfic is my solution: he has settled down an…[Read more]
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Unsung replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
Lol no worries about the non-specifics.
That’s good! My little nephew is almost 14 months now, and running and tripping around all over, and he calls me “Mumum” all the time, cuz it’s the only word he can say XD (My Aunt name is “Auntie Cece” 😊)
I do complain far more than I should! And especially about those kinds of things! They just seem…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy13 @koshka
Milla
No! She’d made a mistake! Their heartbeats which has slowed slightly at her words raced even harder than before when she’d used their names. She’d made a mistake any maybe screwed it all up.
“Wait!” She scrambled over the boxes after them, hurrying to stay close to them as they mounted the stair…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
There are misconceptions, but I can’t remember any specifically, so… yeah. One of the coolest things I can think of at the moment is how the Holy Eucharist, at the moment of the consecration, whether the host and wine physically change to Christ’s body and blood or not, it is a miracle because the words of the consecration are so powerf…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic You have the ability to read a book for the first time again… in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 3 months ago
Enemy Brother for sure. I love that book and the whole decision Max makes at the end is so much more emotional when I don’t know it’s coming and I just love being introduced to and falling in love with Dym, so getting to do it over again fresh would just be like discovering reading again. ☺️ And anyway, that’s a good book, fresh or reread. (Go r…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic You have the ability to read a book for the first time again… in the forum Topic of the Week 4 years, 3 months ago
@kathleenramm The 20th Century Boys manga series. I want to experience the suspense and emotions of the whole series, trying to find out who Friend is…
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Unsung replied to the topic Greetings; I am a Jesus-follower in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
ahhhh, yes indeed! I thought it might be you!
Oh wow! Mended is amazing!! I love that one too! I’m currently listening to In the Stars as I write this, and I’m liking it a lot!!
Oh Elfwing’s writing is incredible! she’s managed to write one of the few things I actually like reading!
(Also oh my goodness, In the Stars definitely…[Read more]
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Unsung replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
Hm… it’s hard to get anything specific in my head! It hink I’d like to know just some things that you think are cool and why, and also if there are common misconceptions about Catholicism that most people believe that aren’t true.
Wow! So many siblings! I love it tho! I love giant families XD And that’s exciting about the oldest! One…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
Milla
The children were moving again. Had they heard her? They couldn’t have; she was practically a ghost because of the Hand. Nothing would erase their ingrained methods of silent movement, now.
Two other groups of people met up elsewhere, their words faint but clear to her.
“Is everything alright?”
“Yes, but I suggest we c…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
Ah, ok. I hope we get SOME answers in this book, even if not all of them!! (I want to know who the last two Black Swan leaders are, and what Mr. Forkle’s original registered name is, etc. heh)
I admire that she isn’t perfect, too! But, sometimes it seems like she’s too imperfect, and comes across as whiny and more immature than she…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
I can think of plenty about Catholicism to share, but I would share better if there’s something specific you want to know. 🙂
(I prefer not to mention it so much, nowadays, because it can seem like I’m bragging, but since you asked, I will tell.) I am fifth of fourteen siblings, with no sets of twins. 🙂 My oldest brother is married and…[Read more]
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Unsung replied to the topic I technically count as new in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
Ah, I thought that may be the reason behind it! I am not catholic, but I have a few catholic friends, and know a bit about it. I’d love to hear more about it if you ever think of anything about Catholicism to tell!
Also, that makes a lot of sense! (If you want to share) how many in your family? I’m the fourth of 6 kids, but the two younger ones…[Read more]
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Unsung replied to the topic Greetings; I am a Jesus-follower in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
Hello, @mkfairygirl!
I think we may have met very briefly and indirectly already! (but that may have been another Katherine!) I was editing Elfwing’s book! Are you an editor for her work?
Yay! I will always take high-fives! Also I’m glad you like the meaning behind my name! 🙂
Favorite song… wow! I love music so much that I cannot say a…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic Side Characters (FP,WS) in the forum Characters 4 years, 3 months ago
Well, I hope you find her love here, too, then. 🙂
That is wonderful advice, thank you!! I will definitely use something like what you mentioned, now that you bring it to my attention!
I think sometimes I struggle with finding a different view because I have been relatively unexposed to different views myself, so it…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic If Hollywood adapted your novel… in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
At first I thought,”Romance, over described battles, messed up characters…”
Then I remembered my book’s cultures.
The first books MCs’ father would be shown as a bloodthirsty military captian, their mother a brutal taskmaster. The fact that this kingdom has a female home-guard would immediately warp into some feminist program. In…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic What Makes An Allegory Impactful? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 4 years, 3 months ago
Yay!!! Allegory is one of my favorite genres!
Ok, what are some of my favorites…
A series my sister is writing, which is totally AWESOME!! She doesn’t have a set title yet, but whenever it gets published it will definitely be my go to recommend!
Narnia. Every time I read them I find another something deeper. The other works of his…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Hey, I love to write in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 3 months ago
Well, I only have one moon, but it’s not exactly like ours, at least not for this far north Kingdom, and is a huge part of their culture. On the first full moon of the frozen months, she turns blood red (when she’s called Warrior), and the first full moon of warm weather she’s gold (Conqueror). These moons mark the two ‘seasons’ of…[Read more]
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EmilySF replied to the topic If Hollywood adapted your novel… in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 3 months ago
WIP HofE: make the parents super strict and awful; make the MC very rebellious; diversify the main and side characters and definitely have a romance/love triangle between some of the six main SCs, and a love triangle between the MC, her love, and one of the other six SCs; include more dragons and make then nastier; possibly mess up the villains;…[Read more]
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