DelightInLife

@graciegirl @that_writer_girl_99 @daeus @kate-flournoy @delightinlife @ethryndal @winter-rose @anyoneelse I’ll be editing for a while.

@delightinlife Now I have the unpleasant task of trying to beta read after @jane-maree‘s wretched thoroughness. *groans* Jane, remind me to have you beta read my novel when it’s done. 😉 Bella, I’m going to do a little tonight, but I’ll probably finish tomorrow.

PS. I’m the Sarah Baran in the comments. Just so you don’t get freaked out by the…[Read more]

@delightinlife
I read your story and so far, to me it looks good. I don’t have a suggestion for a title because honestly, I didn’t quite know what was going on. You dropped me into another world with fighting and everything…That happened way too quickly. I know this is beta and you’re just starting out, but I’d say, write a little more of the…[Read more]

@DelightInLife okay I’ve gone over it. 😀

@DelightInLife @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @graciegirl @winter-rose @jane-maree @that_writer_girl_99 I’m writing now.

@DelightInLife Onto it! *hops over to check it out*

@DelightInLife hopefully it’ll be fine. Should be. (I can always stay up late tonight to do it, so yep.)

Aw no. *gives you more pizza*

@DelightInLife Today works for me. *nods* I’ll hopefully be able to grab some time (between packing :P) to give it a once over for you! 😀
*accepts cookies and passes you pizza*

@DelightInLife So cool that you’re almost done your short story *applauds* I just realised that I’m not sure how soon I’ll be able to get to it because I’m actually away over the weekend and won’t have any computer time. Do you have a deadline?

@DelightInLife So cool that you’re almost done *applauds* I just realised that I’m not sure how soon I’ll be able to get to it because I’m actually away over the weekend and won’t have any computer time. Do you have a deadline?

@delightinlife EST. I guess that does make a difference. 😛 Though I do have to go now. I’ve edited about two and a half chapters! Good luck!

@delightinlife Yep! Still here for a little bit, though I’ll have dinner sooner or later.

@delightinlife Sure, I’ll beta-read it. Just make sure you start a separate thread for it, and don’t post it here. Otherwise, it might get lost among all the writerly ramblings. 🙂

@Delightinlife yeah. 😛 But that’s fine. Ten pages is good with me.

@Delightinlife Welks! 😀
And also before you share it, you might want to check that you have the settings so that the people who you share it with/who click the link can only make suggestions for edits.

@Delightinlife I’d be happy to help out if I could be of assistance.
And to copy it somewhere, just go to the blue ‘share’ button at the top right and click the ‘get shareable link’ and then just copy-paste that in here and it’d work fine.

@delightinlife, thank you! I just LOVE Peter Pan and his story <3 <3, hope you have fun and do well!!
@aratrea, same here;)
@anne-of-lothlorien, thank you very much!! As I can see you are a LOTR fan just like me;) My friends say I’m a Hobbit cuz I’m so short 😛

Please someone, anyone, I implore you on bended knee… draw Josiah the Wiser, sporting his scraggly coarse tarantula beard, with a frog (grinning evilly) on his head. Anyone who can draw, please try… if you need references, just look at his avatar, or watch the Stereotype videos
@Daeus
@Hope
@Kina-Lamb
@Arella-Noreen…[Read more]

@delightinlife Well, I really don’t know enough about the story to be of any help in what sort of situation it could be. But as far as his reaction; how about anger? Anger at the injustice—not a bad thing—but it makes him explode when he should have behaved quietly and calmly.

Thanks @DelightInLife. 😀 It took me forever to get that actually… :/