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@that_writer_Girl_99 @winter-rose @catwing @skredder @dekreel @jane-maree Anyone on?

I’m super super sorry for the confusion. This is only the beginning of the poem, not it in its entirety. I haven’t a title for it yet, but its about friendship and eventually about saying goodbye.

@dekreel I’m glad you like it!

@rochellaine Yes, I should probably read it out loud and see how it flows. And I almost put “relating across worlds”,…[Read more]

@dekreel I may read over it soon if you still need advice.

@dekreel Another great part!
*cough* Well, I have weird things happen cause of the Wonder Portal.
I had the chairs appear so that whenever @dragon-snapper says anything she can melt a chair after. See her tag.
I’m not saying you should change it. It’s great! I’m just saying. 🙂

@dekreel lol, I always find it hilarious what you interpret Perfect Fifths as. And that you make me a bird. XD But did you know it’s actually a musical term?

Ooh. I love this! @gh24682468999 I really love poetry. For free verse, it’s actually much easier to edit, because you don’t need to worry about the structure and keeping the rhyme.

To revise, I would make sure that the words are clear and concise. Choose your wording very carefully, especially with something short like this.

Maybe, you could…[Read more]

@dekreel XD Epic. I love the perfect fifths thing. 😛

@dekreel Aww! This was awesome! 😀

@dekreel This is really cute!

@dekreel @Sam-kowal great. Another question: does anyone find short chapters annoying? Like if its only two or three pages long.

HC

@dekreel 😀 😀 Awesome! I really like how this is a series with little pieces. XD The cake into Perfect Fiths… that was funny.

@Dekreel This is great. XD And I agree with @ClaireC, the small installments are nice; makes it easier to read and in one sitting. 😉

@PerfectFifths If you really could cut in perfect fifths that would be quite a feat.

@ariella-newheart Yours is absolutely hilarious, I love it!

@dekreel Thank you for the laughs, I loved those pictures!! And how long did it take you to find all of them anyway???

Guys, this is the best forum topic ever. Laughter is good medicine! *nods emphatically*

@dekreel Hilarious.

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@gh24682468999 Wow!  It’s beautiful!  I don’t really know how to critique free verse, because most of my poems have pretty standard structure and rhyme. 😀  But I’ve attempted free verse a couple of times, and when I showed my mom, (who said she didn’t know how to critique free verse either) what she told me was to make it flow better, and that ac…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart Accurate.

@dekreel Ok; not going to lie, that last pic of me kind of creeps me out…

@dekreel  *wild applause*

@dekreel And this is why KP is the bestest place on the Internet. Bravo.