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@dekreel Oh, it’s fine! Anything you do will be awesome, I only have a very vague description of her.

I’m off to bed now, I’ll talk to you later! 😀

@dekreel Oh, okay. Here, I have another character:

Thea, a middle-aged woman with shoulder-length black hair often worn in a pony tail. (She’s a battle instructor from Da It doesn’t matter what she’s wearing, I really just need a face. : )

@dekreel Oh, okay. Here, I have another character.

Thea, a middle aged woman with shoulder-length black hair often kept in pony tail. (She’s a battle instructor from Danika’s world.) It doesn’t matter what she’s wearing, I just really need a face. : )

Bye! @dekreel
*goes back to talking to a door*

*laughs* @dekreel thank you.

@dekreel I’ve never heard it before–sounds exciting, though. : )

@dekreel I would love to draw Alfred…is it okay if I finish him after Christmas?

In exchange, I have a character named Cory (male, age fifteen) who has light-brown, curly hair and very pale blue eyes, with light (almost imperceptible) eyebrows. Maybe some light freckles if you want to add them.

*nervous laughter* And tags…
@perfectfifths @ethryndal @daeus @kate-flournoy @epicaddie2
@aislinn-mollisong @daughteroftheking @dekreel @josiah-DeGraaf @ingridrd (No you are not the frog.)
Part one of my Kapeefer Literature.

It has been done… @dekreel I added to the end. I created a new topic for it. *goes to write part two.*

@dekreel I’m here. I think I may be done with part 1! *squints at her work* *thinks* *thinks very hard*

@dekreel I don’t know… Hint please?

@dekreel @perfectfifths @seekjustice @daughteroftheking @emily
@shannon
I am writing my Christmas story.

@daughteroftheking @emily @shannon @dekreel @seekjustice

I am sick and I cannot keep any food down.  UGHHH.  Just in time for Christmas.  Please pray that I am better for our choir performance tomorrow night and of course for Christmas day.  Thanks!

I KNEW THIS THREAD HAD TO BE ON HERE SOMEWHERE! AT LAST I HAVE FOUND IT!

I went to see The Last Jedi on Tuesday, and I LOVED it. First of all, it was so visually appealing– the effects were stunning. Second of all, I really want one of those frozen fox critters, as well as one of those space horses that they freed on that one planet (I can’t…[Read more]

@dekreel
Well, first person is more direct, and more conversational. You can use the character’s thoughts to great effect, just don’t overload them like I first did writing first person (pages of their thoughts, with no story happening)

AS for the prologue… actually, I think it’s good.
“And this certainly is” should be “And this certainly…[Read more]

@dekreel One thing I noticed is that most of your sentences are very similar in length. It would help to vary that up a bit. Have some run-on sentences and some normal and some very short.

@dekreel I need to read this! I just need to find some time.

@dekreel I don’t usually write in first, but I just finished a 100k novel in first, so I learnt a thing or do whilst I did.

-its a lot more limited, but a lot more intimate, so you end up feeling very close to the character.

-as someone already said, make good use of the five senses, especially touch and taste and smell.

-Give us your…[Read more]

@dekreel I know XD

Don’t rush it! And you could always have a sequel. Or turn it into a serial story…sorry, I’m just spilling more ideas 😛

I’m going to call it a night for writing. Instead of my character giving pushback, I’m running out of energy XD I hope your writing goes well! And if I’m not back on before Christmas, Merry Christmas!

@dekreel for me, it’s writer’s speak for being unable to come up with an answer to any of the questions. For instance, if the question is “What are his (or her) fears?” and I can’t find any, I take that as the character giving “pushback.” Really, it’s because I haven’t delved that deep into the character yet because part of me likes them being all…[Read more]