Daniel Thompson

@dragon-snapper Oh, cool. Did you rewrite it?

@sam-kowal Good revisions. (And good synopsis in general, btw. These things are hard.)

Possibly, these three revisions could help.

Feastings end – feasting ends.

Only humans farm in the city of Kurr. Dwarfs would rather win glory in the exosuit arena. When food got low in the winter of 1276, the dwarves robbed us of our crops.

The dwarfs are…[Read more]

@sam-kowal The idea is definitely intriguing.

As far as the synopsis goes, I agree with Kate that the voice is slightly inconsistent. My main advice though is cut anything you can. Like, “believe me, that tends to curb one’s appetite could be cut. There are a few words you cut elsewhere or phrases you could rephrase to sue less word.

Also, I…[Read more]

@jane-maree Ah, yes. Your screen must exceed the length of the image. I went ahead and tiled the parallax images.

@kate-flournoy

Possibly up your alley.

@joisebeth Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!

*hands you cloak and dagger* You are now an official KeePer.

@dragon-snapper That’s fine. 🙂

To clarify though, it doesn’t have to be an author you know. It could just be one you read.

Alright, KeePers, Josiah recommended I contact some published authors about this survey. I’m going to ask if they want to see the results when they come out and maybe if they want to share it with their audience too.

I’ve got a few authors in mind, but I don’t know a tone of authors. Any you can think of who might be interested in…[Read more]

@dekreel Henceforth, I shall have to be careful when I get on camera.

@rochellaine Truly impressive.

@seekjustice I’m not sure it matters so much. Maybe read the Silmarillion first, but I wouldn’t say it’s super important.

@dekreel I think the two worst books I’ve ever read were The Secret Garden and Starship Troopers. The main problem with both of them was that literally NOTHING with a quadruple capital N happened. Not to mention that they’re both very off philosophically.

I also put a book down 3/4 of the way through recently, which I almost never do. It was…[Read more]

Which is to say I have no suggestions, unfortunately.

@christi-eaton Sorry. I like audiobooks, but prefer reading in paper or kindle.

@introvert_girl They’ll be posted on KP. 🙂

@valtmy Wow! This sounds cool enough to give me a headache. lol

I doubt I can answer all your questions, but maybe I can help you with a few. Here goes.

#1 I agree that different people should have different powers at the same time of day. If you do this, there should probably be a governing rule. For instance, males and females are divided as…[Read more]

@rochellaine Whichever you prefer.

@jenwriter17 Glad you liked it. 😀

Just fyi, if you want to tag more than 10 people, you’re supposed to get the permission of a moderator first (me or Rolena). I understand it’s an easy slip though.

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