@dancefree7
Active 8 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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BlueJay replied to the topic Ink/ calligraphy in the forum Art 10 years, 5 months ago
Tell me about mistakes and ink. *Grrrr* But…that’s right…great job.
Argh, forgot the tag for the last lot. So I’ll tag you now. @david. -
BlueJay replied to the topic Pencil/ charcoal drawing and shading in the forum Art 10 years, 5 months ago
*Speechless* This is also amazing. Wow David. You really do have a talent. Keep it up. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Painting in the forum Art 10 years, 5 months ago
OH MY GOODNESS!!! That is so amazing!!! Seriously. 😀 I have not used acrylic. (But I do know how hard it is to use due to fast drying.)
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BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Now I do not like the dark. But I was sick of appearing a wimp before Gavin. As I follow, as close as I can, I study the back of him. What was he before we can here? Had he been my boy-friend? I shake my head. I didn’t have them.
“Oh wait,” I squeal.
Gavin whirls around. “What?”
My fingers rub my temples. “You’re…you’re…my…brother?”
“Is that…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
I don’t know if anyone is still up. (Stupid daylight savings; I don’t get as much time with you guys now. *Sob sob sob*!) But if anyone wants to tag and write with me I would welcome you with open arms. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Peace be multiplied unto you. in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 5 months ago
Peace be unto you too. 😀
Wow! That was impressive for someone who isn’t a writer. (I’m not sure I could have written that. 😛 )
Welcome to Kingdom Pen, David.
How long have you been doing art? I have always doodled, but just recently I have taken up art lessons with my sister. (She being my teacher.)
I have done a dingo in oils and I’m about to…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic W.I.P. Lounge Club (Writers Only!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
I’m not a discouraged writer, but I’ve got an interesting situation with this novella of mine. I wrote it, loved the plot, and then figured out I needed to seriously improve the writing. Now I’m keeping the plot and totally rewriting it. Seriously, I’m completely rewriting the majority of it. I’m so glad it’s a novella and not a full-length…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Emergency beta reader situation (HELP!!!!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 5 months ago
@ivy-rose I love editing stories! Send it to me right away.
You can contact me here: http://www.thescratchingquill.com/contact/
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic It's Just a Little Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
No, it was genuinely helpful @overcomer. Even if I didn’t end up using any of the corrections (which I am— I’ll probably do what you suggested with the shattered shield and snapped bowstring) it makes me step back and look at my work in new ways, which is always good.
Yes, I have written the story— my WIP, actually. Or more like a WIE—…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic W.I.P. Lounge Club (Writers Only!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Oh, I’m having plenty of fun, actually! All those character introduction scenes I had a blast with starting out? I get to do ’em all again! 😛 And improve them!
I. Love. Working. With. My. Characters. It’s probably the number one reason why I write. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic It's Just a Little Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Thanks, @overcomer. 🙂 I really appreciate your meticulousness. 😉 I’ll definitely take all those corrected lines into consideration.
Yes… I had so much fun with this poem, because it was special to one of my main characters. His mother used to sing it to him when he was little— scared of the dark and of thunderstorms. Near the climax of the…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic W.I.P. Lounge Club (Writers Only!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Ooh, nice topic! I can just ramble without worrying about whether or not I’m being coherent… COOL!!!
Right now I’m working on mopping up the mess of a beginning my WIP has… or had, would now be a more accurate word. It was really, really, really slow and rambling getting started, so I’m working on streamlining it and pushing it off strong on…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Anybody open? If not, at least I’ve made a public announcement that I’m about to work so I guess I’d better go do that. Tag me if you want to join.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Oh wow @overcomer, totally no rush— I’d no idea you were actually going to do an in depth evaluation of either poem. 😛 Not that it won’t be welcome— but you really didn’t have to if it was too much trouble. I was thinking you would just skim over it once and tell me your general opinion.
So… no pressure. 🙂Wow, though, I really…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Awesome, @spradlin! Very inspiring. That’s something I personally struggle with remembering, so it’s a good one to keep in mind. 🙂
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Greta and
Masyn are now friends 10 years, 5 months ago -
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
For all adventuresome early morning spirits, I’m about to do some editing if you want to join.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
I just realized @faithdk, that my time was out. So you had probably finished. But I still wrote for 45min and completed a poem about birds. It is very cute. (Even if I do say so myself) 😉
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BlueJay replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Awesome Sarah. Great work!
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