@dancefree7
Active 8 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@anna-brie What about 4:15-4:45? If not 4:30 will be ok, but I might stop a bit before 5. Depends when we’re having tea.
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Daeus started the topic I'm So Mad At Dickens!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
It’s a good thing Dickens is gone, cause I might give him a knock on the head if he was still alive. Ok, it’s not that bad, but whatever you do, don’t do this!!!
So I’m listening to Dickens’ Our Mutual Friend (spoiler alert). I was liking it a good deal for the first half of the book (no surprise there), but then he made me very upset. Here’s…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@anna-brie Just letting you know that I won’t be able to write this afternoon as I’m out till 4pm. If you want to write after that, let me know. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
*eats cookie too*
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
344 Haha I beat!!!! 😛 *eats cookies* See what you’ve started me doing @daeus. I can’t stop eating cookies. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay 328
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Wait up! *puff puff* I’m here. Ready. Set. *realizes you’ve already gone.* Goes.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
*Doesn’t wait to be told* Ready. Set. Go!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Oooooh *excited whisper* cookie cookie cookie… I love da cookie…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Sailboat Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
What they said @writefury. 🙂
And I love this— it’s a classic example of everything I cannot do. It’s simple but powerful, cute but touching, and above all lean and to the point. Excellent work!
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BlueJay started the topic Stop motion in the forum Film 10 years, 5 months ago
I don’t know if there are any of stop motions out there who are writers too, but even if you’re not, you’ll probably still enjoy this movie. This is one that I made last year for a competition. It is based on the series of books “The Kingdom Series” by Chuck Black. I hope you enjoy it. 😀
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jnaGaEBI9K0
Feel free to…[Read more]
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BlueJay started the topic Stop motion in the forum Film 10 years, 5 months ago
I don’t know if there are any of stop motions out there who are writers too, but even if you’re not, you’ll probably still enjoy this movie. This is one that I made last year for a competition. It is based and the series of books The Kingdom Series by Chuck Black. I hope you enjoy it. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@anna-brie Ok. I’ll be busy till 10 too. 😀 And I’ll be writing at 10:30 with @daeus if you want to join us for the half hour. (And we can make it an hour if you want to continue) 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Little Sailboat Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@writefury I would change a couple little things, but not much. The best thing about this poem is that it really personalizes the boat. *adds boat as friend on Facebook* Oh, and also the rhyme (I love rhyme).
Here are the little tweaks I would make:
And wood deck a sheen
Sounds strange. Decks are not sheen, they have a sheen.
As darker clouds…
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BlueJay replied to the topic Little Sailboat Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
O wow! @writefury That is really good. I really do like it. I’m not very good at poetry, but I would fix or change anything. *Other people might think differently. 😛 *
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BlueJay replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 5 months ago
I’ll join you @writefury and @hannah-olsen I read way too fast. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 5 months ago
I’ll join you @writefury and @hannah-olsen I read why to fast. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 5 months ago
I’ll join you @writefruy and @hannah-olsen I read why to fast. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic W.I.P. Lounge Club (Writers Only!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Haha @daeus. 😛
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Hi everyone! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 5 months ago
@hannah-olsen
Welcome Hannah!!! *throws sparkly confetti* So glad to have you on the forum!
Idaho is so beautiful! (That’s were I was born) Enjoy it for me!
Yay an Elizabeth Gaskell fan! I’ve seen Wives and Daughters and have yet to read the book! - Load More
