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@gretald Nice. I got 331 plus a little research

@Daeus I going to stop for now. I got 572 words of a new short story written. Thanks for writing with me! 🙂

@Daeus I going to stop for now. I got 579 words of a new short story written. Thanks for writing with me! 🙂

@gretald Ok. Good. See you then.

@Daeus I’ll join you for a bit…say, until 2:30?

Oh, good @bluejay. I guess I forgot to do our fifteen-minute thing, but I did get some writing done.

By the way @anyone, I’m planning to write now, so join me if your up for it.

@kate-flournoy Yes, I agree with this so much. {Or, as @spradlin would say “gives many thumbs up.” 😉 } Great point about the smallest personality traits affecting the character’s decisions.

I’m back @daeus *waves eagerly* I didn’t get as much writing as I had wanted to, but I got some stuff down on paper. I’m unsure how many words as I was using a pen and I’m not about to count. 😛

This is AWESOME. You guys have done so much since I was gone. It’s looking great. *Stares into the distance and dreams of mango*
@daeus @faithdk @kate-flournoy

@Daeus humph. 😀

Yeah, well, I’d agree. Don’t have much to add.

@Daeus, thanks so much for critiquing it! 🙂

@gretald Ok, I finally got to this. I like it. You did a great job with improving the “showing” stuff.

Thanks for reading and critiquing it, @kate-flournoy! 🙂

Hey anybody, I’m off to write if you want to join me.

Yes @gretald, much better! 😀 I’m getting a lot more imagery this time around, not just a vague sense of what happened. Good work!

Ok, I jumped in. I’ll let you all know more about it when I’ve actually been on it a while.

Did my umbrella just break? Oh, no.

Hey guys. I just thought of Balaam and the talking donkey. The Lord made the donkey to talk of course though the donkey didn’t have a soul. 🙂 The Lord has pretty creative ways of getting people’s attention.

All right, @Daeus and @kate-flournoy. I’ve edited some. It’s still not quite done, but if you have time, would you mind reading it through? If you don’t have time, that’s perfectly fine.
@kate-flournoy, Is the showing vs. telling problem better? *looks hopeful*

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