@dancefree7
Active 8 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Daeus replied to the topic The Sea in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
@bluejay You’ve done visual poetry!!!! (I love visual poetry)
I think it’s great.
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Daeus replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@kate-flournoy OOOOH, the mask thing was perfect.
Ok. New statement. He is my all time favorite villain ever.
I — I…
…I need to watch that again.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
OH MY GOODNESS SOMEBODY ELSE FEELS LIKE I DO!!!!!!!! Seriously, I’d given up hope.
Seriously, he might just be my all time favorite villain ever.
I concur. Most vehemently. With everything you said. Don’t let me start ranting; I’ll never finish.
One other clever thing they did with him (though it doesn’t have much to do with his character) is…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@jess & @dragon-snapper I’ve got to stop now and go and cook lunch. I got a poem writing which I’ve posted in the poetry forum for people to look and comment on. So head over there…. 🙂 *disconnects call*
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BlueJay started the topic The Sea in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
I’ve never written a poem like this before, so I thought I’d see what you guys thought of it and any suggestions that you have to make it better.
@daeus; @kate-flournoy; @faithdk; @overcomer; @jess; @dragon-snapper; @winter-rose; @ivy-rose; @anna-brie; @warrioroftherealm; @clairec; @spradlin; @jadamae; @hislittlerose;…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
*laughs with you* I know, isn’t it amazing?!? 😛 @jess What will they think of next???
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
*laughs with you* I know, isn’t it amazing?!? 😛
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Wonderful! I shall. *hangs up phone* Useful things phones. 🙂 @dragon-snapper
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Wonderful! I shall. *hangs up phone* Useful things phones. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
*dials @dragon-snapper* Hello, hello? Dragon Snapper, are you still writing? *waits for response*
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ClaireC replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Thanks for the invite, @dragon-snapper, but I’m busy! 🙁
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Daeus replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Yes, the characters were over the top. That’s why I liked it so much. Not only were they well rounded, but they played off each other so well.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@dragon-snapper As Daeus’ personal secretary, I should tell you that Daeus usually writes a lot on Saturdays, but doesn’t write on Saturday nights.
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ClaireC replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@bluejay, I’m reading a biography on Charles Spurgeon. It’s very good. He was an incredible man!! 🙂
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@daeus Haha don’t worry, I won’t stone you. Besides the fact that the actor who plays Kylo Ren looks nothing like Hans or Leia he is such a good villain. Now honestly I don’t really care for Star Wars (Gasp! I know) (Also don’t even get me started on how I feel with Star Wars Land opening in Disneyland) But I really enjoyed The Force Awakens more…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@dragon-snapper
Well, for where I live, the most dangerous animal we get is the Tiger snake. I think it is third on the list of poisoness snakes.
In Australia it is the Taipan snake and the Mulga snake. I’ve never seen any in the wild. Thankfully!!!!!!!!! -
Daeus started the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Hi guys. I’m really late. Before you stone me, let me just state that I admit I’m really late. I finally watched the new star wars.
I wasn’t quite expecting this, but it actually super impressed me. It’s definitely my favorite star wars episode no question about it. There are a lot of reason’s I liked it, but the number one reason by far was…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Quick Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years ago
@hope I like that version. Nice balancing of length and depth. I might just change a couple tiny things.
What else could he expect with it repeated in his nightmares…
A quest he never imagined offers him that chance.
Weigh down on his mind.
hovers just out of reach — the promise of the word…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Quick Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years ago
Hmm, do you think it will look good in the review section on the back of a book?
No.
And I like that last one quite a lot. I think that works, definitely.
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