Hannah Whatley

I hope Rey remains just a normal person. I like that she’s a nobody.

Oh and Hannah, yes. Finn did change the way I saw Stormtroopers very much.

@His-Instrument @Daeus I totally agree with everything that has been said. (Like you needed my stamp of approval. I’m giving it anyway).
And yes, Hannah, I totally root for Gollum. Don’t worry. We’re weird together. 😉

The thing I’m most worried about with Ren is the general incompetence of script-writers. (I know. So cynical). This character…[Read more]

@bluejay Great poem, again! I really do love it. The varying length of the lines creates a beautiful sort of rhythm while you’re reading. I usually prefer rhyming poetry, but you pulled this off really well. Keep up the great work! 🙂

@his-instrument I can agree that Gollum and Javert are both great bad guys. Not Kylo Ren, but still really good.

Whatever they do with Kylo Ren, it needs to be complex. Absolutely no way can he turn out to be a full bad guy. Something as simple as Vader’s redemption however would simply fall flat for him. I think his mental commitment and actions…[Read more]

@sarah-h I’d love to read it. I am really beginning to like visual poetry. As Daeus pointed out, this one wasn’t visual poetry, but I’m going to keep trying.

Bah. It didn’t work. Well, you can see one of them here if you want to. Unfortunately, I don’t have the other one online currently.
http://www.thescratchingquill.com/the-cloud-and-earth/

@bluejay Yeah, I like it. Focusing on symbolism could make it even better, but it’s good.

Actually though, I wouldn’t call this one visual poetry. Visual poetry is where you write a normal poem, but the way the words are arranged forms an image. For instance, you could write a poem about your ancestors in the shape of a tree. Your one about the…[Read more]

@bluejay Yeah, I like it. Focusing on symbolism could make it even better, but it’s good.

Actually though, I wouldn’t call this one visual poetry. Visual poetry is where you write a normal poem, but the way the words are arranged forms an image. For instance, you could write a poem about your ancestors in the shape of a tree. Your one about the…[Read more]

@bluejay The Home> Forums> General Site info> Questions How To: Subscribe is for navigation purposes. For instance, general site info is a subcategory of the forum, so it is listed after it. Those are links. I don’t know why it says subscribe at the end of that navigation sequence. It’s just black text for me. No link. Doesn’t do anything. In any…[Read more]

@bluejay. Just lovely! 🙂

@kate-flournoy, You’re probably going to get a chance to read a lot more. I like writing poems like this.
@dragon-snapper Yes, I was reading through the dictionary and thesaurus as I wrote it. 🙂

It was rather interesting, because the two that I struggled on, gentleness and self-control are two that I have major failings in. So I obviously know…[Read more]

*looks around for another way to communicate.* @dragon-snapper stop*temper, temper, colonel* stop Hopes you’ve watched Hogan’s Heroes. stop. If not, stop, you should. Stop.

*looks around for another way to communicate.* @dragon-snapper stop*temper, temper, colonel* stop Hopes you’ve watch Hogan’s Heroes. stop. If not, stop, you should. Stop.

*tries to communicate**finds no phone**pouts*

@Dragon-Snapper

@Bluejay this is really interesting. I’ve never read a poem quite like this before, but I like it. Nothing really to point out. Great job.

Okay great @Bluejay. I got 1,020 words written, and I was working on a dream-sequence, so I’m pretty happy. 😛 Those are kinda tricky. 😉

What did you get, @Dragon-Snapper? *folds claws primly* I didn’t waste my time melting up the plastic seats, dear fellow dragoness.

@kate-flournoy I think I’ve found what I need. I’ve posted it in the poem forum, so if you could jump over and have a look that would be great.

I’m stopping writing now too, (@dragon-snapper; @lightningmouse (if you joined us) I got…one poem written. 🙂