Hannah Whatley

@anne-of-lothlorien
Again, I’m late…but WELCOME TO KINGDOM PEN!!! I recognize you from Hope’s blog (I’m gretald on there). 😉
Yesssss! I love your book choices! Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, and The Mysterious Benedict Society are some of my favorites. 🙂

@bluejay Seems like you did a pretty good job with the huge limitations of trying to fit all those words in there. One thing to note is that the lines:
“His words must be erroneously
They definitely weren’t symmetrically”
are not grammatically correct because of their -ly endings.

As far as improvement, because of your limitations, I think your b…[Read more]

*runs in far too late to join the party* *waves and pretends she’s been here all along* Hi, @anne-of-lothlorien welcome to the (wait for it, wait for it…) bestistest place on the internet! Oh, I know all you troublesome KeePers, you got there first, but I couldn’t help it! 🙂

@bluejay, hmmm…

@clairec Thanks. 🙂 It is a little bit hard to read, so I’m think of changing it, but I’m not sure what too. *surprise*

@sarah-h, That’s fabulous! It’s great to see God’s hand at work in your life, isn’t it? 🙂
@bluejay, love the profile pic! 🙂

@sarah-h Thanks. Maybe I’ll be brave…@daeus can you come and have a look at this poem? What do you think? Any critiques?

@sarah-h I will be praying. And that’s wonderful. The Lord is so faithful. 🙂

@sarah-h *crashes through door and gives you a good night hug.* 🙂 *gasps for joy* We were writing together!!??!! YES!!! *jumps for joy* *sneaks out of room quietly* 🙂 🙂 🙂

@sarah-h, I will definitely be praying for you! 🙂

@spradlin, don’t worry, I know you weren’t worried, it just reminded met that I hadn’t already mentioned it. 🙂
@kate-flournoy, Thank you! 🙂

@ClaireC with pleasure. 🙂

@Claire-C with pleasure. 🙂

Anne!!!! You came to KP!!! Oh my goodness why did you have to do it while I was on vacation I haven’t properly welcomed you and this is terrible oh dear!!
So first of all— WELCOME TO KINGDOM PEN, @ANNE-OF-LOTHLORIEN!!

Yes. So now that that’s out of the way… I really like your poem. I agree with the comments about the rhythm— it does seem to…[Read more]

Ooh, such a lovely topic! @Mark-Kamibaya thanks for starting it. I missed it initially because I’m on vacation and wifi is spotty, but you may rest assured I have not abandoned the forum. 😉
As for my favorite structure/arc… well, it really depends. I don’t think I have an absolute favorite. The two I primarily use are Hero’s Journey and…[Read more]

Gasp! @spradlin, Sorry! 🙂 I know you don’t really mind, but as a note that I forgot to mention at the beginning of the topic, If someone doesn’t tag you, don’t be offended. 🙂 *looks suspiciously at you* *suspicious look changes to one of concern* *runs over and thanks you* 😉

dragon-snapper *salutes*