@dancefree7
Active 8 years, 10 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper Hurrah!
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
I haven’t been to the Writer’s Corner in a long while… but I’m writing over the next hour if anyone wants to join in.
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 5 months ago
Alright @mark-kamibaya, you want a movie review/opinionated rant. Your wish is granted.
Three words: La La Land. *Struggles with putting all the feelings into words for this post*
Okay, guys, I’m serious though. I think it is official that La La Land is my favorite movie. (And I’m the type of person who doesn’t have a favorite movie.) Last…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@jess @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @graciegirl I’ll be writing for an hour if anyone’s interested.
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@feedingmygoldfish I am fashionably late! But welcome to the kingdom! So glad Brianna convinced you to join us here! Any friend of her’s is a friend of mine… especially a fellow squirrel lover. 😀
Which is your favorite color? A black, red or gray squirrel? Have you written a book about squirrels? -
Daeus replied to the topic Please critique! Three poems here. in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Do you mean age nine? If so, I’m really impressed.
Not that they’re Byron or anything, but for a nine year old, they’re quite good.
I feel really bad, but for once I can’t really pinpoint what needs to be improved with these poems. I know there’s some tone, methodology, or approach about them that’s all the same but I don’t know what…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A #2 in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years, 5 months ago
@aratrea I’ll try to make it.
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Daeus replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Ok, here’s my edits.
Prologue:
A tree loomed up ahead.
This is a drag on the pacing. Remove or see if you can incorporate into the next sentence.
The girl covered her ginger hair
You already said her hair was ginger. No need to repeat.
The corners of Halle’s mouth turned upwards
Replace ‘Halle’s’ with ‘her’.
She wasn’t far fro…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 5 months ago
@I-J-Anderson hey it’s totally not a problem. Life happens. I’m sure all of us understand. 😉
Besides, it’s good to let a topic rest sometimes. Otherwise people get burned out and start hating it.THE THREE LITTLE PIGS IN SHAKESPEAREAN LANGUAGE?! *delighted scream* THAT SOUNDS AWESOME! :”D Tell me how it goes. I’m sure you’ll do great.
And……[Read more]
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Daeus changed their profile picture 9 years, 5 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@GracieGirl that’s totally fine. 😉 I can be patient. *cough*I’ll make myself be*cough**cough*
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
*ESTJ comes running in ready to take charge if this apocalypse and rebellion should flare up further.* Also @daeus, I’m totally game for you to be the dictator, can I be your Press Secretary? I have plenty of experience actually. *smirks at memories from when I worked in the Oval Office* good times.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@emma-flournoy *gasp*
The apocalypse is coming, people. Let’s all bow our heads and pray.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *wants to be original, but can't think of suitable greeting* *sighs* Hello in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 OH. WOW. I… I really like that. *grins so wide she splits her face* Way to go for a cool spin on a unique twist. *thumbs up*
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@emma-flournoy Me has problems. :/
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Winter-Rose glad you asked! *grins*
Okay, so the whole MBTI system is built on eight letters. A personality type is composed of only four— in your case, INFP.
Each of the eight letters stands for a certain thing.
I= Introvert
N= iNtuitive
F= Feeling
P= PerceivingWhat about the other eight letters? Well, to each of those four I just listed…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus *shakes head* It was coincidental. Don’t let it go to your head. 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@kate-flournoy Good job saving the best for last. That’s always my policy. Patience is a virtue.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Hope *rolls eyes* You would need a booklet… XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@@that_writer_girl_99 yep. Sixteen possible combinations of four out of the eight functions.
ISTP,
ISTJ,
ISFP,
ISFJ,
INTP,
INFP,
INTJ,
INFJ,
ESTP,
ESTJ,
ESFP,
ESFJ,
ENTP,
ENFP,
ENTJ,
ENFJ.😀
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