@dancefree7
Active 8 years, 7 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@ethryndal @dragon-snapper Oh, nice picknick going on here. I think I’ll join in. See you in an hour.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper Very well. I edited about 1,100 words.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper I’m back if you’re there. I think I’ll go for forty-five minutes to an hour.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper Signing off. I edited 600 something words.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper I’m back for another half an hour or so.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *raises hand shyly* Um, hello people. I've got a question! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@DaughteroftheKing Yeah. What he said. XD
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Daeus replied to the topic *raises hand shyly* Um, hello people. I've got a question! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@DaughteroftheKing My own personal way of wording this (which is infinitely better than Kate’s way, by the way) is that you want the villain to seem like an enemy of the villain. At least, that’s one good way to do it. There are probably others.
So, like Kate was saying, you want him to seem like he has secrets. People are naturally going to…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper Okay, signing off now. I got some editing done. Be back later.
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Kate Flournoy posted an update 8 years, 11 months ago
@daeus we seem to have a rogue topic over in the General Writing Discussions area… @DaughteroftheKing started one and I tried to reply and now the topic’s gone.
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Scripture Memorization! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper thanks, I’ll check it out. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic *raises hand shyly* Um, hello people. I've got a question! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@DaughteroftheKing *excessively evil chuckling*
This topic.
I likey.
Well, it sounds like you have a good thing going already— he seems a very detailed, duplicitous character just on the surface without people knowing he’s got an evil layer, and that’s brilliant. If the character seems complete as he is (with his own little contradictions…[Read more]
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Scripture Memorization! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@gideon-sowdon can you memorize passages on scripturetyper?
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Kina Lamb replied to the topic Scripture Memorization! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Wow. I haven’t posted on here in a looooong time, but in the meantime I’ve been busy! Now that I’ve finished all the memorization required for Bible Bee, I decided to post it here as an encouragement + motivation for y’all. 😀
These are the passages I’ve memorized recently:
Colossians 1:16, 1 Corinthians 15:1-4, Genesis 1:1-5, Psalm 29:3-4,…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper Hey, I’ll join with you for 30 min. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper I outlined a lesson for an e-course
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper Haha. Thanks. Okay, signing out now.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper I’ll be on for about twenty minutes or so.
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bethanys.inky.roses replied to the topic The Thread Where I Complain in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
I know I wasn’t tagged in this discussion, but I noticed it in the recent forum replies and wondered who was complaining. :/ Thank you for asking this, because I’ve been having similar issues. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic The Thread Where I Complain in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Oh. Duh. And pray too.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Thread Where I Complain in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@dragon-snapper Well, what everybody else has already said is fantastic, so I’ll just point out one other angle you could look at it.
Maybe your trouble here isn’t so much that you don’t enjoy writing this story as that you don’t enjoy writing this story. If that makes no sense, it doesn’t matter. The point is, here’s the solution:
Enjoy…[Read more]
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*slaps hands to face* Horror of horrors!!! Agent Daeus is on it.
Mission accomplished sir. You have my gratitude. *salutes*