@daeus
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus I can think of several backstories that could have happened to him and I do NOT want to hear about them… XD
It is amazing though. Just goes to show how crucial it is to understand the functions themselves and not the stereotypes.
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Gracie replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus Are we speaking of the apothecary Ed got the potion from?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus OH— my goodness. Yes. You’re right. *stares at screen**nervous smile**huddles deeper into blankets and cuddles stuffed leopard* Yeah. He is.
Please. Never become an apothecary. 😛 -
Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus I’m beta reading for a little bit.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus it wasn’t THAT bad… XD
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DelightInLife replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@dragon-snapper @daeus Oh, thanks! Now that I clicked on the link I realized that I have taken that test before. My result was “Advocate” or INFJ. I just didn’t notice those letters on the side of the personality type until now.
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Gracie replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus @Kate-Flournoy @Dragon-Snapper In all my MBTI experience, Hans from Frozen seems to present a shining example of an ENFJ villain. Please don’t kill me.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus wellll… I have an ENFJ anti-hero but he’s not written yet, so… XD
*ahem*
Yes. Let me think.
Hmmmm… *scratches head* You guys aren’t natural villain material.:P The only one I can think of straight off the top of my head is Mr. Waternoose, from Monsters Inc, and then it’s close between ENFJ and ENTJ.
Also… hm. *dredges through the…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus Hmmm…the only ENFJs I know are you and myself…
@delightinlife Yay! Yes, that ‘cliche’ I think is so funny, because although true, and although I’ve used it myself, it may well have been used by every author out there. 😛
@jenali 😀 Thanks so much! -
Ethryndal replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus You need to write a villain handbook.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus *jots notes quickly into notebook* I see…another great lesson from King Daeus.
You accidentally controlled the people. *claps* More ice cream for all. -
Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@dragon-snapper @daeus I share your love of music and how amazing it is! Since King Daeus loves music so much, will he have a personal bard?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years, 2 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper welllll… generally I’d say if you’re connecting with one character better than the other and giving them more screen time etc., switch MCs because you’ve probably got them mixed up, but it looks like you already tried that.
So… the problem may not be your attachment to SACK, but your lack of attachment to the quiet one.…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic in the forum Characters 9 years, 2 months ago
*holds up Monopoly card* It says, ‘collect two cents from each of the players.’
So, I’ve had this little problem for maybe a year now. It worked okay for first person, but now that its third person, its gets trickier. The little problem in question, perhaps not as little as that, is favoritism.
Generally speaking, I have two main characters. The…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years, 2 months ago
*holds up Monopoly card* It says, ‘collect two cents from each of the players.’
So, I’ve had this little problem for maybe a year now. It worked okay for first person, but now that its third person, its gets trickier. The little problem in question, perhaps not as little as that, is favoritism.
Generally speaking, I have two main characters. The…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years, 2 months ago
*holds up Monopoly card* It says, ‘collect two cents from each of the players.’
So, I’ve had this little problem for maybe a year now. It worked okay for first person, but now that its third person, its gets trickier. The little problem in question, perhaps not as little as that, it favoritism.
Generally speaking, I have two main characters. The…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus Oh, goodness! The only thing that would make them more terrifying is being held by evil butterflies…which is what’s going to happen…this should be interesting. 😛
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Rachelle replied to the topic Reader Behavior Survey in the forum Publishing & Platform 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus
You think someone who runs Go Teen Writers would be interested in sharing it on their site maybe? Didn’t read all the posts before this one, so I dunno if this has been suggested already or if you’re still looking for answers at all. =P But whatever. -
Cloudy started the topic Short Story Idea (May turn into Novella) in the forum 9 years, 2 months ago
So I took a 6-day intensive on taming of the shrew. It ha quickly became my favorite Shakespeare play. So I wrote this blurb that would probably be stuck in the middle of the story somewhere:
The knight ride to the mouth of the cave. The afternoon light fell on him, dappled through the trees. The cave for which he had been seeking for o long…[Read more]
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Cloudy replied to the topic Phoenix Tears – Please Critique. in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
I’m bad with meter. I’m not done with the poetry curicculum and mom lost it like, two years ago. 🙁 But what meter would you suggest? I’ll look it up and try to tweak it. @daeus
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