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@emily I use Powerpoint, actually. XD It’s easier than Paint. 😛

@jessi-rae Well, not subspace, but it does have to do with lots of computery stuff. It is sci-fi. And wow, are pictures for sci-fi hard to find!

@winter-rose 😀 Thank you, Frodo! Unknown realms are hard realms. But fun realms. Me loves sci-fi, but the fantasy pictures are the…[Read more]

@Salome01w4g @corissa-maiden-of-praise @graciegirl @hope @kate-flournoy @emily @shannon @winter-rose @catwing @daeus

So up to now my book has remained a pretty big mystery. I haven’t really said anything as to names or plot or stuff. But here’s a collage for one of my MCs, Ike, in my WIP: SECTOR ONE: INSURRECTION.

*sits back, not tense and not…[Read more]

@daeus Yes, it definitely helps! The contrast between the two scenarios is really cool. Thanks 🙂

@kate-flournoy 😀

Thank you @daeus and @that_writer_girl_99 ! I was rethinking it because I just read two amazing fantasy books where they were in 1st person, and it was epic! The characterization was so much better because you were inside Crisa’s/Mina’s mind, thinking their thoughts. And I write in first-person most of the time anyway, so I might be better at it.

@Daeus eeeeeh… no pressure. 😛

@That_writer_Girl_99 good question though. I think… it seems to me that you’re asking not just about the Warden, but about the moral balance of justice and mercy. How do you show the necessity of justice (bad actions have painful consequences) while balancing it with understanding and forgiveness (we’re all…[Read more]

In regards to the Warden’s specific character, I think I agree with you. I guess my problem is with the theme…the way I want the characters to act regarding the Warden heavily relies on what they believe about choosing mercy over revenge, or the reverse–revenge over mercy. I’m not sure how to convey that with regards to the Warden’s character,…[Read more]

@salome01w4g @daeus @that_writer_Girl_99 @catwing @epicaddie2 I’m writing now, and might do some editing later, but whoever wants to join me…

I’m definitely not the best person to help out on this, because I struggle with it too, but something that I’ve picked up while being on KP is the concept of “show not tell”, something that helps to infuse dialogue with physical actions, emotions, or facial expressions.

Think about your characters. When they’re angry, do they clench their fists?…[Read more]

@seekjustice @daughteroftheking @catwing @daeus @epicaddie2 Me and my headphones are going to force Dragon Snapper to write this terrible chapter.

Who’s with me?

@daeus Thanks for the welcome! I write a variety of music, but mostly just contemporary Christian, and an occasional, mellow-dramatic love song, haha. I’ve posted some originals on YouTube if you ever want to take a listen. https://www.youtube.com/user/LivyJarmusch

@catwing Yay! I’m so excited that you love two of my favorite things! *Bursts into…[Read more]

@daeus @aratrea I’m also not on the list of tags.
It looks good though! I might have to go for a replay though with the timezone differences.

@Daeus yikes… okay. I’ll see what I can do.

@aratrea
@daeus
Thank you guys! Oh I’m glad there’s a replay.

@catwing No! No! *facepalm*

Here. If I must be Chosen Kid, then there’s also Chosen King and Chosen Kate. The Three Chosen ‘K’s. XD

But I’ll go by Chosen One.

@daeus @kate-flournoy

@ingridrd I’m so sorry to hear that! I’ll keep your family in my prayers.
@daeus I hope like crazy I can come!!! I would be crushed if I was abducted by the minions of the evil overlord before then. (Translation: I would be greatly saddened if my schedule didn’t work out.) Anyway, My name doesn’t seem to be on the list of tags, and as a knight in…[Read more]

*bites nails* At this point I think I can make it. I guess we’ll see when the time comes but I really want to be there so maybe I can bend a few things to make room for it if I have to.
What time is it, again? @Daeus

@Daeus okey dokey. 🙂

@emily @shannon @daeus @graciegirl @daughteroftheking @dragon-snapper @catwing

Collage two , the lady isn’t the best representation of Pennie but she’s close. (Make her about 16)