Daeus

Guys. Just. Guys.

The never-ending discussion.

Kylo Ren is awesome.

@daeus Looks good. *thumbs up*

YOU GUYS ARE TALKING ABOUT ROGUE ONE WITHOUT ME?!?
😜 (But seriously, my sis and mum were in the room when I saw this and they both said they thought our dog had hurt himself somehow because I made a sound “like a wounded puppy”. 😂)

@salome01w4g my favorite character was Cassian. 😀 But I loved K2 and Jyn as well. On the risk of sounding possibly…[Read more]

@epicaddie2 I know you’ve been waiting for this…

This is Anastasa from my LotR Fan Fiction that I haven’t written down yet.
The dragon is Smaug. The mermaid is Anastasa mother. The guy in the boat is Soron, Anastasa’s father. I know I put him twice. The Ocean Rose is Anastasa’s favorite flower.
I know I added lots of stuff.…[Read more]

Kylo Ren is the worst…

@xonos-darkgrate FINALLY! Someone who agrees with me. (@kate-flournoy and @daeus think he’s awesome for some reason…) 😉

@daeus @kate-flournoy @xonos-darkgrate – Whaaaa? Am I missing out on a convo about Star Wars, specifically one of the best Star Wars movies: Rogue One? I looooved it! 🙃🙃

@daeus Great! Awesome blurb!
Have you considered putting an excerpt at the front?
And it seems accurate to the book and the characters from what I’ve read so far. *fingerguns*

@kate-flournoy @daeus lol hmmm……… tempting…. all my friends told me they liked RO way better than TFA idk… sadly it’ll probably be years before I see it since we just moved to a tiny town with a dumpy library 🙁 :*(

@kate-flournoy @xonos-darkgrate @daeus
What!!!! He was such a jerk….. Jyn , K2 and Cassin where my favorites. everyone died in the end…. 🙁
Daeus come on it’s the best Star Wars they’ve made!! (Welll… I haven’t seem TFA yet sooo..)

@xonos-darkgrate @salome01w4g @daeus agreed, Krennic is awesome. Favorite character… eh. I can’t pick. 😛 Probably Cassian. I love K2 though.

Sounds pretty good. Maybe a bit.. short? I don’t know. But I think it’s better than the one before!
@daeus

@daeus looks great!

@raevynstar
I think you could do one of two things. You could go with what @daeus said and make her completely confident in herself…or you could make her doubt herself and her abilities. Maybe she’s really insecure and doesn’t quite know who she is. Anyway, just some thoughts.

@Daeus yep. Nailed it.

@daeus – I.LOVE.IT. Bravo! 🙂

Have some ice cream:🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨🍨

@Daeus I likey. 👍 😃

@daeus Yeah. What they said. 😉

Btw, I love the book. I’ve gotten maybe 6 chapters through? I don’t really keep track of chapters…

Oh yeah, ha… forgot about that. Thanks! @daeus

@Daeus *dashes in with thoughts* *realizes everyone else has already voiced her thoughts* *is slightly at loss for what to do* 😜

Only two things really stood out to me…
1. As Kate said, mentioning Jerrold in that fashion makes him sound more important to the plot than actually was. I mean, he was a TON important to Trev’s character arc and the…[Read more]

@daeus I agree about the last sentence/paragraph thing (and most of what the others said about rewording throughout). I don’t think the whole thing should be dumped, but particularly just the last sentence sounds sort of pushy and/or excluding or something along those lines. If you were to cut it, it might need replacing with something else, but I…[Read more]

@daeus I haven’t read the book so I can’t say much except, drop the last paragraph. It breaks up the flow and doesn’t seem needed.