@daeus
Active 5 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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TheAcornman replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Ohhhhh. Most impressive. You should definitely keep writing this. 😀
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Ingrid replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus
Keep writing it. It’s not worthless at all. 😉
And about the diary vs. just first person narrative thing, do it the way you started to. If you don’t like it after a while, change it.
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Sage G replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus This is a really interesting idea, I’m very intrigued! I actually really like diary format stories, I’ve thought of writing one, myself.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@DAEUS WHY DIDN’T YOU TAG ME FOR THIS. I MISSED IT. *horrified sobbing that trails off into pathetic wails*
We is upset. *scowls* Don’t do it again.
*coughs* Yes. Anyway. After all that drama, I have nothing to say after all, because I love it. And you should definitely write it, because I want to read it.
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Kylie started the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper @daugtheroftheking @epicaddie2 @emily @daeus @kate-flournoy @seekjustice @jess-penrose @xonos-darkgrate @jane-maree @catwing @anyelseI’msosorryIforgotyou Hey, Guys! I am going to try to do NaNoWriMo for the first time this year *jumps up and down excitedly* But I do have one problem, I have no idea how to get started! *bites…[Read more]
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 6 months ago
Hey guys! *waves* I’m going to take another hiatus. I’ll be back within a week or so…
Don’t do anything exciting without me.
@emily @daeus @kate-flournoy @catwing @epicaddie2 @graciegirl @ethryndal @ingridrd @salome01w4g @anyoneelse 😀 -
Joy replied to the topic Critique this? in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
Anyone?
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Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
Maybe I should tag some people…what an idea?!? *slaps face*
@emily @dragon-snapper @kate-flournoy @daeus @that_writer_girl_99 @anyone -
Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus I know, right?
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Even the king is against me.
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Oh! Cool. 🙂
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Great! And I hope you realise it’s in edit mode rather than suggest mode. I’ll try to just make comments, but suggest mode is really helpful for making edits that you can later accept or reject.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus Righto.
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Catwing replied to the topic SO…I need some advice in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel I have never read the Catcher in the Rye… So I can’t help you really… I don’t think… But I can tag some people…
@daeus @kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper @daughteroftheking @jane-maree
@seekjustice @jess-penrose @emily @jessi-Rae
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus I clicked the link and all that, will the doc be in my email or something? 🙂
@salome01w4g Be that as it may, you have to get through the creepy stuff to get to the good ending. 😉 I’m sure I’ll go back to it sometime. 😀
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Gracie replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus I likey. *double thumbs up*
As far as the diary debate-thingy…If it will just be a short story or a novella, I say keep the diary format. But as a reader, I would feel a little weird reading something in that format for a full-length novel. It kinda disconnects me in a way. Even in third person narratives, you can reach this point where…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus Keep writing it, and if it still feels worthless, stop. 😛 As of right now though, it is pretty cool. His POV is intriguing. I think mostly only writers would understand—at least really GET—a story like this though, not regular readers…
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@allison-grace @emily @ingridrd @daeus @catwing @epicaddie2 Baring unforeseen circumstances such as dog or something else, I’m writing for the next hourish.
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Gracie replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus Soooooo, funny thing. XD We actually had to cancel the camping trip because the weather hereabouts is icky, so if you still need another beta reader, I’m available. If you have enough though, no problem. 😉
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus This is the 3rd Person thingy, right? But regardless, yup. It might be closer to two weeks depending on what comes up though. Me and my notorious slow reading. :/
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We’ll try to keep the excitement to a minimum…see you soon!
*plans all the exciting stuff to happen while @dragon-snapper ‘s away*
Hehee, *suddenly gets inspiration to finish next 50 chapters of each of my WIP* Enjoy *innocent grin*…… 😉 😛 😀
@emily @salome01w4g @ethryndal You guys are making it really hard to take a hiatus… 😛
It’s our evil masterplan, Snapper. We don’t like being without you.