@daeus
Active 5 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Hannah replied to the topic New Form Topics in the forum Announcements 8 years, 5 months ago
Looks good! @daeus Nice visual appeal (if that makes sense)
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic New Form Topics in the forum Announcements 8 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus It is extremely spiffy. All the wonderful CATEGORIZATIONNNN.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic New Form Topics in the forum Announcements 8 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus cool!
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DragonGeek replied to the topic An Interesting Concept I'm Working On in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 5 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic War-Torn City in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
Thanks for the input guys! I think I figured it out. The electricity for the entire city was taken (by means which I shall not post for fear of spoilers. That’s way there’s no standing danger for my characters, like lava or smoke, or nuclear waste or… *cough* monsters and demons ( @daeus , if ever I need the randomiest idea ever, you’re the man)…[Read more]
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus Yes:D
I am. I didn’t know until last night though.
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
@shannon 😀 Well, I’m glad I’m not the only person who uses it.
*Looks at @daeus with admiration*
Awesome :D! I like a few different styles. The rest of my family all likes country and bluegrass, but I don’t like that as much. I still play some of it though. And also, classic rock, and Christian pop/rock. And also, bits of my favorite…[Read more]
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Sam Kowal replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus Thank You!
And Stan thanks you too
Yes! He’s gotta be one of, if not my favorite, author. His worldbuilding is insaaane *lapses into dreaminess*
I just discovered him though, and I haven’t actually read Mistborn. I’m definitely going to though. And Stan is too 😀
I really like The Scarlet Letter and Les Miserables, too
Although I found…[Read more]
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SeekJustice started the topic How would you start a riot? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
So, I need my main characters to start a riot in my book, like a big, on the street sort of thing. How on earth are they going to do that? I really have no idea. I’ve just had one of my characters make a passionate speech…and now I’m not really sure what to do.
How would you start a riot?
How are riots usually started?
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Hannah replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus Have fun writing some aunts, and grandma want me to go shopping with them.
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Hannah replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus oh sweet! First chapter, the best and yet worst chapter 😉 ….. I’m building up the climax of my story and it’s kinda torture.
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Hannah replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus hey there! What are you writing?
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PrincessFoo replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus I heard of the principle. Thanks for the advice, I get it now.
I do have the Emotion Thesaurus, and it is the bestiest! I expect to be using it a lot.
I should probably clarify, I do know what flirting is. 😉 I just don’t know how to do it. Or to have a character do it. Everything instance where I have seen flirting, it’s so subtle I…[Read more]
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PrincessFoo replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus Thanks. I can do that. So what would I have my characters do when I want my readers to gasp. Have them act surprised in another way? Or rolls with it? Or reveal that they secretly figured this out pages ago?
I actually think I have heard of “Daeus’s principle” before, in an Orson Scott Card book on writing. XD
@dragon-snapper The thing…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@PrincessFoo very solid advice so far. I’ve never written a full-on romance novel, but every story I’ve written has had at least one romantic subplot, so I’ve been doing this for a while. 😉
My one piece of advice kind of ties in to what @Daeus said, but takes a little different spin on it. The most intriguing, engaging thing about your…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus once again I’m late to the party… everything looks great. Very professional. Nothing to criticize; good work. 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus Ah, there we go. Nice job. 🙂
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus much better! I haven’t got anything else to note about that. 😀 *thumbs up*
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katie replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus – it looks fantastic! Great job!! 😀😀 ice cream: 🍨🍨🍨
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
I’m writing a romance…I’m not sure if I’m following the rules, @daeus. But it’s going ok in my brain. So. YEAH.
#PANTSING!
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