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@jane-maree probably general overall chapter, but also stuff like inconsistencies (which some readers have already pointed out), and yes showing/telling stuff. Thank you!!!

oops got your tag wrong filewriterbase13x , just look at the post above

@filewriter13x okie dokie! I’ll try to draw him tonight and hopefully post him by morning! 👍🏼

@jane-maree you’re welcome, ’twas my pleasure 😉

@Jenwriter17 okay so I don’t want to go into full editor mode and scare you (been there, done that, it was bad xD) so what exactly are you looking for critique on? The general overall chapter? Or some more details like showing vs telling, etc.?

@dekreel. I love, love, LOVE it!!!  Thanks for tagging me!  I am not familiar with this topic.  Have you been posting all your stories here?

Oops X’D  That was an epic tag failure.

@supermonkey42  KPA!! XD

The GIF-Hiders: An Easter Story

Part Ten: Encouragement. In Many Ways.

And so, Jenna, Dekreel, Catwing, Skredder, Valentine, Rochellaine, Jane Maree and the troll-thing hid GIFs for the grand Easter-GIF hunt together. In the meantime, they talked laughed, bickered, argued, joked, and ate.

It didn’t take long at all for Jenna to warm up to her n…[Read more]

@Jenwriter17 thank you so so much for organising this and it was a heap of fun to do it. *throws confetti* Thanks again. 😀

@daughteroftheking thanks! 😊 I do a first sketch in pencil, line it in .3 and .1 Micron waterproof liners, then colour in watercolour. I did the white detail with a Sakura Gelly Roll white pen. Thanks so much for the drawing prompt!!!

@dragon-snapper  Awesome! Thanks. (And sorry I didn’t reply sooner)

@filewriterbase13x  what kind of soldier is Jared? Is this a historical book? Is it futuristic? What is the “aesthetic” of the book? (Steampunk, sci-fi, fantasy, medieval, etc)

@seekjustice okay, i think i let you have access. lemme know if it didn’t work.

@filewriterbase13x Thanks!  I thought that is what it meant, but wasn’t sure.

@warrenluther04

@warrenluthet04 Maybe just dont put me in with any fairies or elves.  I have been thinking about it, and I dont think its a good idea for me.  Thank you for understanding!

@filewriterbase13x Your WIP sounds cool.  Do you write poems?

@rochellaine You have eight adopted siblings?!!  Wow.  That is so awesome!  How many siblings do you have in all?  I have an older sister, and two younger sisters, and none of us were adopted.  I wish I had more siblings!

And can I ask a super dumb question?  What is sci-fi?

@rochellaine just looked at it! hilarious! *looks at outlining notes to make sure something like that doesn’t happen* 😉 😀

@rochellaine haha, okay sounds good 😀

@sam-kowal. Thank you so much, Stan!  Oops…I mean Sam.  ;D